Okay...here's my fresh out of the keyboard review.BORING. CLICHED. FILLERS.The story offers nothing new. It follows the same trend as other female MC novels of similar type.Right from the mysterious male lead to MC's cheat service, there's nothing fresh or interesting The author has copied points from other famous female novels. The General household, the overly loving grandpa, the amputated uncle, the lists simply goes on and on.Even here the arcs are not well executed. They feel disjointed and rushed. The flow that needs to be there, is lacking. Overall it looks more like reading a series of short stories.Female MC's character...difficult to say. Author has tried to make her a badass swindler MC with the generic doctor history. He failed.She looks more like an arrogant antagonist out of a Xianxia novel. Her swindling is forced and clearly unbelievable. Either she's so charming that the swindled person can't realise or the swindled person is so dumb that he doesn't realises You again have the set of characters required in a female MC novel from a general household. The PM house, the fiancee prince , the king etc.Their character build is extremely plain with nodepth.Anyway I can't find any redeeming factor about this novel apart from it being a female MC novel.The author has played safe. A disappointing read full of cliches after cliches joined with chapters full of fillers. The only fun point: the novel is fast, the translator is great.Nixes (As of chapter 60)
"Fire!"
some crazy amount of romance which I hope won't become too much.
Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert]This novel is different from the most.. Instead of MC dying on Earth and reincarnated in the magical world, this novel does the opposite.. MC is born in a magical world as strongest Mage and reincarnated on earth without any mana, just pure normal earth.. In previous life, MC is betrayed by the young king because MC, who has become old and just wants a retirement life with his family.. Plus, he and the old king are close, and MC also has done so much for the kingdom.. But as the young king inherited the Throne, the king himself quite corrupted unlike his father (previous king).. After the young king offered many gifts, one after another, to avoid MC retired, MC is firm with his decision, causing the king poisoning MC..As MC reincarnated as a normal human on normal Earth, MC lived a life of normal people for 17 years UNTIL one day, the gate appeared, and the monster poured out from the gate.. As a result, MC and his family got attacked by the monster and got an offered by Evil System.. MC rejected the offered by Evil System, causing him to become an unawakened person.. Of course, some people in the world are awakened, and some are not.. But after two years, MC became the strongest swordsman among unawakened people.. Not sure how a person "use-to-be strongest mage" becomes the strongest swordsman (excluded awakened person).. Due to that, his guildmate feels more burdened as MC, who unawakened person, can get many achievements while they who awakened barely achieve anything.. This has caused MC to be betrayed by his own captain.. MC held tightly at the end of the cliff after being pushed by his own captain, and can see his end.. Then, after he fell from the cliff, he survived and awakened a new system, which I thought it going to be an overpowered system, but it was not.. MC got betrayed and died on previous life, and he almost died by betrayal AGAIN on this life? Will he ever learn from this? Then, when he finally awakened, MC got nerf right away with "crack soul"? And he can only get information about his crippleness after he becomes SSS-ranker??Not only that, after he survived the fell, he went back to the guild and didn't kill or cripple the person who tried to kill him? Yup.. this novel is not for me.. I was expecting an OP MC, but this novel doesn't have one.. No wonder this novel going into Hiatus.. I wish the author good luck..
Its your amazing Author again, You guys must have noticed that I have changed some content and made little tweaks to the previous chapters. I have done this because the previous chapter were lacking in both quality and quantity when it came to words and plot etc.. so I had to take the bitter pill and I have been improving the previous chapters for the past 48 hours making sure there are no errors.
It's only the beginning but your chapter 8 convinced me because it shows a possibility of reflection for the use of magic that I had not really considered before. I hope that the side full of thoughtful thought and strategy will be introduced in more detail in your webnovel ;) I offer you my encouragement so don't disappoint us
this novel is a break for me from all the same type of novel going on with mc being indifferent ,cold and lustful.
I've been reading a lot of novels by this author, and I love every single one of them. This looks like a really cute and wholesome novel so I'm excited to read it.
I wonder when this is actually going to hit the 11ch/wk. it's a good story, just has horrible update speed
For everyone asking about what chapter to start at from the manhwa, I really recommend starting this book from the beginning. The manwha cuts a lot of the information from the book, and the book is overall much better IMO
You should also make a spy network which is solely in control of king as there are many traitors or betrayers in the kingdom. In many cases, arms generals or nephews seize power and make the king a puppet ruler line fromn1542 to 1565 Rama raya made Sadasivam raya (the legal ruler) puppet ruler.In Battle of Talikota, which had seemed an easy victory for the large Vijayanagar army, instead became a disaster as two Muslim commanders (Gilani brothers) of the Vijayanagara army betrayed and switched sides and turned their loyalty to the united Sultanates during critical point of battle.
I am Writing this review at chapter 162. I'm not Asian but African, West African to be precise and I could not help the tear that formed in my eyes when reading this. I so much love my country and heritage, but Colonization wiped out everything there is to know about us. It is even to the Extent that we see our original Gods as Demons and fervently Worship the Christian God. It is appalling and disgusting in and of itself. If I could find information about our past, I too would have loved to Write something like this, Hence my immense appreciation for this book.