RobertC7044
novel is quite interesting, the fact that he has a lot of clones that have conscience helps in making him more op. also i quite like his character, ruthless and domineering. he's a unique mc out of all the novels that I've read, since there were mc's out there who are also ruthless and domineering but these mc's rely on something that made them that way like for example, system cheats or some kind of powerful plot armor that changed their character in a not so understandable way, in short its illogical an example is when a a guy was suddenly reincarnated from modern society and has never seen any killings in his life was able to kill in cold blood and wpupd emit killing intent when he only killed a few people in the early chapters while in this novel it is well explained how he became ruthless and domineering ir tyranical in character. my only problem for this novel is the update stability so author is this still updating or is this dropped already?
Boasting. Boasting! BOASTING!Unrelated Statement. Epic Unrelated Statement. Ultimate Unrelated Statement!I will do stuff and things! Real big stuff! Real cool things!
They'res a Book Eating Magician so there also has to be a Book Reading Daoist.............................................................. ......................................................................
I recommend nobody read this novel. Mc makes highly questionable and stupid moments in a matter of couple chapters turning it from a promising novel to trash. It all started with mc going to test his talent.
Author did you drop this beautiful novel ?………………………..
I really cant understand how its possible for this novel to achieve a raiting like that.I mean are all the people that are putting a raiting out there even reading the same novel i am or have they even read half of it?Now let me start with my honest and (as far as possible) objective opinion.First of all even after all the harsh things i did say so far im not saying that this novel doest deserve any attention as the story in itself is pretty enjoyable to read. Otherwise i would not have read it for more than 1400 chapters. The thing is im not willing to put a 4-5 star raiting out there for any n novelovel that doesnt make my eyes start to bleed. As you can see i dont have anything to criticize about writing and update quality. The world background is also pretty good in my opinion. The big problem is the story developement and chatacters which in my opinion are the most important parts about a novel. The thing is the problems here are not easy to ignore.The author pretty much create a new stage for the mc every arc and discardes it completely afterwards. Items, abilitys people he met are completely forgotten a few chapters after first mentioning them.The timetable doesnt make any sense either at some points and important aspect of the story are just ignored from one moment to another. Sometime its like reading one filler after another without context between them. Obviously some "forgotten" things are easier to ignore than others but its definitely bad writing either way. The author just creates too many loose ends and doesnt bother about connecting them afterwards.Some examples with spoilers:•The bow he could only draw up to 10% because he was to weak will probavly never be drawn further because its never mentioned before.•The evil energy + demon puppet just disappeared•His totem and all about it•His avatar•the fact that xinton got first in that ancient battlefield 60 years ago. How the fuck should that be even possible if protagonist is struggling for survival (as always) even now?•and my personal favorite the cultivation supression while beeing inside that ancient battlefield. Progressing only in story because of that supression and few chapters later its suddenly gone without giving a fuck.These are probably not all the problems but definitely the most annoying for me. It might also be possible for me being wrong about some of the mentioned things but all in all a novel with problems at its core should be at a 3.something raiting as a good read while being bored and not 4-5 as there are enough outstanding novels that dont get anny attention.Btw im not a native eng speaker so im sorry for butchering the language here and there.
this is junk food xian Xia trash to the limit I'd rather read an encyclopedia since I'd be learning something while getting bored to death not to mention the characters are one dimensional and the mc is unlikable and boring there is next to no plot, the number of badly done cliches are astounding. don't waste your time qidian is filled with these trashy novels the only reason i read this was because i was stupid enough to believe these fake ratings that are everywhere nowadays.
I started to read this novel hoping to enjoy it but to my greatest surprise it was a let down its so boring I would rather read another book than this book
Seriously its so freaking awesome, specially Kyle he improved himself too much nd the way he started the plans nd all its always interesting to see, reading it once or twice is never enough, hell when he punished Jayson it was also so damn cool I mean come on he just broke him its was awesome, just love it a lot ✔ New concept in reincarnation✔ Protagonist is awesome✔ Awesome world background ✔ Sincere Brotherhood✔ True sibling bonding ✔ Action Just awesome
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I just enjoy whatever novel it is, only issue with mad snail is dropping in the middle. but I like his novels TDG
I love this so muchone of the best novel I've ever read. I love the world building, the kingdom building, everything was amazing. I hope this novel will get more popularity
