The narrative is well crafted, although it leaves the reader with much to imagine. The characters however, despite being fictional displays real emotions. The story so far is serious minded and intellectual.its a good work. Few punctuation errors and fewer dialogues. I look forward to more chapters.
Ano ano ba ipapaprint saanunsyo ilan ba yung teacher and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there
what an unlikely heroine, tainted and impure, just the way I like it! I love the world-building involved in the story. and I seriously enjoyed every minute of reading! ♥
So far for being a new novel it's cleanly written and rather refreshing! I like it, it is tagged as BL and GL so maybe we'll get a diversity in characters?! I'm kinda excited! Can't wait...tho it seems BL will play a big part in this! Ahhh! T_T I want to read more!Author says they'll publish every Monday! Hope that is true!
is where chance it would be picked up again? it is one of the better novels on this site.please pick it up again
I am giving it a 5 but I actually rate it 4. The reason being that it is seriously underrated novel. The premise is interesting and the VR game is good enough. I am not an English expert but the writing quality is really decent. The absence of various occupations, NPCs and quests makes the scope of game narrow but the PvP is the main driving force here and it is written nicely. The characters are neither OP nor weak. Overall, it is worth reading.
Ainz Approved
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Really good, I look forward to the continuation!He falls into my library without hesitation140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...1
Someone has recommended to me. Well... it's good.
This week's trial read is becoming better and better in almost every aspect. I am very much intrigued by the flow of this novel; it is not that unique, but it has this sort of air that pulls readers to be trapped within and not escape anyhow. This is an excellent start for a beautiful read.
Don't skip this novel just by looking at the title. It turned out better than I thought. So better give it a try.Although MC lets himself run over by people all the time, the writing is too good to ignore it. At least imo. (My English is not that good so, take my review with a grain of salt)