I like this story because of the world background and how it shows the mc training and training and how the win clan raises from low class to and upper class. And I am very excited on what the spiritual realm would be like. The translation quality is very good and I have nothing to say about it.
The only new novel that I've enjoyed for a while mc a bit dumb but not really that stupid pick this novel.................. (-_-) (<_>) hehe
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The first chapter is just terrible and almost made me drop it. But I persevered and to my surprise found myself pleasantly surprised. Their is character growth and real world dilemmas. My only critique is that the MC is copying other movies and the stereotypical characters. However, it does a good job of portraying a film director and producer.
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Supporting you.....................................................Keep up the good work.You are doing great for a newbie.But do try to keep it original
Good writing quality just needs regular updates and harem candidates have reason to like him thats good. I’m interested to see what happens but no more chapters.
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!!It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation..I think I already read this story before, and it already finished/ending.. But I still like to read this story..I like this kind of story.. And I can say that this story is one of my favourites Naruto fanfiction..Please continue this story until finished ??Love your story.. Keep up the great work author san ?????
You get no information about the world, characters, fights, levels, anything. The author just throws a massive dump of crap at you and hope it sticks. No sense of time, or development. You are thrown into a world where everything moves a mile a minute. If you want subpar writing and story and just need to waste some time than go ahead, if you got some self respect don't read. Sorry that this sounds mean but this story pissed me off.
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The premise of the story is absolutely great, enough to make it a top ranker. Not suitable for Sci-fi purists, because it exists under the pemise of 'what if a cultivation world never discovered cultivation and went the tech route instead'. Too bad the pacing gets so horrible that occasionally you can skip 10 or so chapters of self-reflection and pondering without missing anything, because it will be covered in a follow-up pondering session. There are also a lot of lengthy infodumps that become relevant tens if not hundreds of chapters later. Honestly, the story needs an editor who is not afraid to whip out the axe and cut the unnecessary content. Oh, and don't get me started on the romance department, it's a truly cringeworthy horror story, at least when it gets to the first girl he goes steady with, because PoRnHuB has better love stories than that, and so do some harem fanfics and novels. Would've been way better if she remained an ice queen forced to stick by the mc due to circumstance while still set in her own ways and culture, with the mc putting in a whole lot of effort to tame her, slowly working his way into her heart.
I basically don't like mc. He got shot so he forms team with them. Super passive mc against antagonist. Tried almost 20 chapters but couldn't get through.