Can I get a proper discord link that works please ??
Hey guys. This here is my first work posted here on webnovel.com. As I am still very new to writing, I'd appreciate any feedback for my work, positive or otherwise. Please do give it a try. It may not appeal to everyone, I would like to try making it a somewhat unique reading experience. Thanks in advance guys and gals.
I say this story is quite interesting. the actions are quite describe. the more i read it, the more i want for more. i really wished for this book to get popular soon enough. keep up the good work author.
With much enthusiasm and avidity, the author presents us with an engaging story. The storyline, as well as the presentation and design of the characters throughout the story, continue to be appealing and winsome. Sadly, I do have to add that there are a lot of mistakes concerning grammar and vocabulary - and that’s alright, everyone makes them - yet I believe it would be a pity since this work has some potential. It simply needs to be polished into the gem it might be. I truly believe that this work could profit from an experienced and/or skilled editor so that it might develop into more.Overall, I find it to be a relaxing and engaging read, very suited for this platform. I wish you a lot of fun continuing your story.
If you don't have a good level of english then pass on this novel. Plenty of the words used are wrongly writen, especially the use of were - where - we're or your - you're - yours, etc. The use of ',' is also trashy.Writing quality is deplorable.That aside, characters dont really mean much emotionally. You see them, they die. Thoigh I have never read a novel with a main character like this so it's kinda nice.Cultivation is a mess but I dont really care personally. Never really paid attention to it.To me this novel is just to kill time and read without pondering too deeply while at the same time training your english to find spelling mistakes.cheers
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World building ! This writer truly cares about the depths of his world thaT he created. Everything was crafted to make it more realTIc ?????? the MC is relatabLe and easily understood. i Cant wait tO see how He deals wiTh his sItuations.
Amazing! I can't wait to ream the spin-offs and one-shots!! I loved this story so much that I even re-read it!! love you author and can't wait to see what you write next!!!
It’s a great story so far, and quite funny too! I think it will make it far! 20/10. Mwjsjwjhsusneokwpsminyvrsqadfvoojnyvrdyhjooklljnjjhjklollinbtfeahj
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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