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saya sudah membaca hingga chapter 240 Mtlterlalu banyak kekecewaan saya dengan novel ini.ide cerita yang bagus namun dengan eksekusi yang buruk.Bukanhakah dia berasal dari masa depan yang kembali ke masa lalu ?seharusnya dia tau tidak semua orang pantas ditolong, logika keceradas sosialnya seperti anak sekolah dasar.karena dia dari masa depan seharusnya dia tau pentingnya faksi, tapi lihat ini dia merahasiakan Lv dan statusnya di gamen seperti anak sekolah dasar yang berlagak sepeti pahlawan betopeng di komik.banyak hal yang bisa dia capai hilang karena tingkah lakunya.Dengan latar belakang cerita yang mengisahkan orang tua mc mati diserang naga.bagus karena menyarankan orang tua mumbuat akun game, Seharusnya dia tau tingkat keamanan didunia itu sangat menghawatirkan karena akan terjadi perang.dia tidak bisa selalu berada disekitar orang tuanya setiap saat,seharusnya dia menyarankan orang tuanya untuk masuk bermain setidaknya 1 kali dalam seminggu, dengan itu orang tuanya akan naik level, yah walaupun setidaknya maksimal level 1 namun setidaknya ketika orang tua akan pindah kedunia game itu mereka akan memiliki status yang lebih tinggi dari orang tua lainnya atau kebanyakan orang yang bukannya hanya memiliki pakain saja ketika pindah.dia bisa membuat orang tuanya memiliki job samping seperti peneliti sihir, ahli elixir, atau hanya sekedar job bangsawan yang mengatur bisnis mc, dengan itu mc akan memiliki orang yang bisa dipercaya, novel ini bukan hanya mc saja yang pindah kedunia game !!dibebera bab dia mengatakan para pemain sudah mulai membuat faksi namun dia memberikan informasi secara bebas ke forum yang bisa dilihat oleh semua orang.Jika latar belakang cerita ini mengangkat panji peradaban Bumi dan berperang melawan kekuatan mengerikan dari Dunia Lain, saya akan mendukung tindakan mc menyebarkan informasi secara bebas seperti ini, namun novel ini tidak.dan banyak lagi kekesalan saya saat membaca novel, anda bisa membacanya sendiri.
How should I say this, I enjoy the early chapters as it feel better in structure and goals despite a lot of plot holes.There are a lot of grammar error especially the "you, you are, your" family, it did not bother me that much as I'm non native english speaker but I need to call the author about it so he can improve his writting.The world background let say vague at best, there is not a lot being told or explain. There are some good and famous areas being told but not in great detail either.The characters design are rather bland with a little bit of interesting twist, but they are all pretty much did not have good development.The creatures so far are pretty much forgotten, like how the zombies can evolve but MC only evolve the dog -> wolf and that's it, nothing else. So the variety is extremely lacking.The story was thrown down the drain, I feel like there are a lot of unexplain time skip like how the MC all of sudden control pretty much most of the world within few days. How there is no opposition at all and how the author only touch minor characters that will change nothing for the fate of the world.Overall, I enjoy my time reading it but the flaws are obliviously as long as I use a little bit of brain power. Interesting idea, messy excecution.Note : I don't know if I want to continue reading this or not as the longer it goes, the less excited I got.
This novel is very good. Recommend to read this. But do you know the most important thing about this novel? The length! Holy! I hope the word count doesn't go down if this gets picked.
If you want to read novel and feel depressed then read this,it started very good but soon due to starting of patreon a story which should have been very enjoyable turned out very depressing story...
Honestly was so badly cliched and written I couldnt make it past chapter 3. All these reviews seem suprr fake and I have no idea how thos novel has 4 stars.
Kaya•Shadow Hunter (Night Hunters’ Leader) asked, “Are you the Goblin that killed Manster•Moonwalker? Hmph, who would have thought that an Archdruid would actually die by such a despicable monster’s hand. Prepare to die. Today, I will annihilate you in the name of the Moon Goddess Elune.”“Punish me in the name of the Moon? F*ck, do you think you’re Sailor Moon?”That was funny and I finished all 60 chapters and I hope this is selected.