Good, amazing character development, but slow update.............................................................................................................
This is a surprisingly great half parody cultivation novel.I really like this and hope you keep writing.....................................
Better than a lot and I mean a lot of novels out there and I am talking about the free chapters I don’t know about the rest can’t read it?1 question for y’all:Hoe the fk to I support the novelGhsbbsbbsbs
Plzz dontt addd hareem it so boring and make MC like some sexual type beast who only wanna **** women nivel is best i lije it and add more poerfull villain
Vampire premise is interesting and different. I'm not sure how I feel about also adding a full dive video game aspect to it though. I'd rather one or the other, but it's just a personal preference.A few too many characters introduced who don't seem to have much relevance to the story or real originality that distinguishes them from any others that could be swapped in for them.The MC is rather funny at parts, but I feel like he's lacking some depth to his personality. His reactions and thinking seem somewhat surface level, and he's just doing things as events come to him. Maybe we'll get more of his backstory and deep/real reason for his motivations later. This impression is just to chapter 14.But most importantly on a reading fluidity aspect, there are a lot of blocks of text. There isn't enough paragraphing, especially with the dialogue where each time a person speaks, it should be a new paragraph. These blocks of text are long enough that it even bothers me reading on a computer, so for mobile, it's especially disgruntling.Besides that, the pace and rpg elements are nice, and the writing doesn't have many blunders in terms of grammar and such. Good job so far!
Interesting story with a more unique character who has a stable growth. Even if he has a kind of system its more the support type and he has his own decisions. It's also nice that the story is continuous and not like after 100 chapters there's another apocalypse and they fight and flee and fight again..
The very beginning starts with the death of Last Son of Krypton without any outside interference which kinda tickles up but sets the development. Bruce wants to redeem the death of his best friend is connecting us to the story. The son of Superman has not done his training yet, like Martian manhunter or Diana should teach him. This degrades the quality of the story. Son of Sups is acting like a real Teenager which provides realism to the story.
It ok if your new to the genre but i have seen all the story plots the author uses,Few new unfortunately, The power gain system seems unique And world building is a strong point but the arcs I have definitely “been through before” (all in all, if get me out of my own reality I’d say it did the job fine) - Poorly educated American
1.6M views and only around 35 reviews? Is the author deleting reviews or what?Oh well on this webnovel platform such thing is normal I guess
when I saw the synopsis, I immediately got a review and gave this slump novel 5 stars because that's how it should be. Good good good good good good good good good good good good
With a great author like this one and a such storyline that clears away the boredom from the old boring novel concepts. I can't wait to see more from you author. Keep going ???
Nice story but update is slow si i might get distracted and forget it in long run. But i like wen nine and thirteen actions and innocence.hoping it will get a regular update