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We walked in when we heard a scream...
"Six months, it is then" I said with an evil smile on my face.
"No harm done, Lady Feng Ming."
He doesn't dream but for some odd reason- Jin was completely unaware. Jin was a semi-light sleeper, so for him to be so deep in a coma that he couldn't even be aware of his surrounding, was alerting.
"They're fighting because of Luna, shouldn't you also be trying to remedy this situation as well?" my poor Luna, to think she attracted the attention of the two most ruthless individuals possible. Knight who just hates everyone and Nathaniel who is just ruthless and cold blooded towards his enemies during battle or does who he in his way but his caring and compassionate towards those he sees as friends and family.
There weren't any zombies attacking the Country Club because of the location itself.
Amazing story, new ideas and ways that that differs from normal cultivation novel. Wonderful novel, with great story, power fights, figting realms, divine beast, lots of humber, and much more.
4 chapters a week? Are you guys crazy?? Such a well thought out and non generic book is sidelined while that piece of Shit shadow hackers is being focused on? Do you guys have Shit for brains? So disappointed...
The book is really interesting. The unique stylistic devices add a flavor that makes me want to read more. I recommend this book. It has a good story development and wonderful character design
i am disappointed to be honest , but yh here we go :- as of right now updates seems ok -decent writing quality could use some improvements but good enough to be considered GOOD in webnovel .- nothing much to say about WB as it is a fancfic except some major/minor things like there being quite a few senju clan members in the village and some new wind jutsu i guess idk if there's more as i stopped reading pretty early in the genin arc or either i dont temember atm.- Now CD and SD , its terrible imo , like mc is a paranoid , cowardly , robotlike mf , i couldnt relate to nor could i get my self to like him no matter how i tried , let me give you an example , he is above average and i trying to not show his above average abilities as not to get danzo attention … like mate you are an orphane civilian with above average skills , nobody cares about yooh also he is stupid to think he could deceive experienceed NINJAs with his little acts , but do you know whats worst ? It actually bloody works on even the hokage supposedly the best shinobi there , like this is ridiculous to the highest degree .i just couldnt get my self to read past this nonsense , but if you dont mind any of this stated above then you would probably enjoy the fiction , yikes i guess really liked the story idea huh cant believe i spent a whole day reading , was so frustrated i hit the gym before writting this comment ??
One word. Descriptive. Yes, descriptive. Very descriptive that you can imagine the gore scene. And the funny thing is, it is satisfying to read the way the author describes the even. I don't know if something is wrong with me lol.
Good luck little author? hope your novel does well remember if you lose aspiration for this novel take a little hiatus could be a month or more then maybe you could write this novel again remember to tell it straight up to your readers that your taking a break or it might be really serious and you could just quit this novel again remember to tell the audience that is all my advice ?.
