Thank you for your support for last few days it so amazing that this novel selected in the new fresh novels thank you for giving me a support
realy goodI love this type of stories,I am going to see if the auther have any other books.I HAVE TO KEEP WRITING IF I WANT TO POST MY COMMENT
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I also like mysterious stories. Good going keep it up..... I am eagerly waiting for 3rd chapter. I know it would be interesting. Having fun reading it.
The writing quality is decent, the author does this EX: “Nevare get over here!” Anne runs over there.” It’s very annoying. The MCs emotions are training and being more humane than other orcs. Zero character development 41 chapters in. Overall mid novel
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4 stars for me.Just read 10 chapters, I wish to read a little bit more but I find a point in the novel where I'm sure many people would drop it.Let's go to the facts;- MC characters is... awful, it's clear that he was a childish and incapable person previously. He has no ambition whatsoever and is very impulsive in his behavior. He doesn't reflect upon his actions nor think about his future.All in all, is quite distateful as a main character, for me he seemed like a random character in a book who died later on.-World building: In this aspect I can say that is well written, although there's nothing crazy, it fits quite well and you don't have a hard time imagining it. Pretty solid.-Interactions: This is a point where I think that while it's not bad, it can improve much more. It's okay but seemed somewhat lacking. There's also little monologues or other tools that could tell us what the MC and other characters think about their situations.All in all, it could clearly improve.-System?: Yes, there's a question mark there, because I keep wondering myself in these 10 chapters, is that really a system? It feels more like a shop.Story wise, i see a clear problem with the novel, which is, the main character.There's no signs or whatsoever that he could improve, there's no goals and anything like that in these chapters that could give you the hope to keep reading it.There's also another point I wish to say this early, is quite simple to see how the author didn't wished to point out in the development of some business or something for the MC, I'm aware this isn't a kingdom building novel, whoever, knowing how his system function, is clearly somewhat a cheat if he could gain quite amount of money, which would ease out his problems. But since this would eliminate the drama and plot for the author, since there would be little to no struggle for the MC, there's no words nor indication from the MC in that aspect.Like a said, 4 stars novel, which is quite good in web novel standard.Just hope for the Main character personality to improve since it makes harder for me to keep reading it.Wish you good luck and success author.
The way this story starts is quite confusing as the change in MC is way too extreme be his personality, power or anything else. After that the story becomes stable and is going in a good direction. Updates are slow. There is almost description regarding the world or the power levels involved. The struggle of MC is real as he didnt inherit memories of new body so looking forward to it
Guys this novel is literally on the level of a printed novel the character development is flawless its a bit darker than most novels you will encounter but it really drags out that excitement and on edge feeling cause you just worry about mc and the character are so well fleshed that everything they do has a reason and everyone has a motive where its not simply that they are dicks so the villains have an amazing depth to them that makes you understand them instead of simply hate them for their actions and if you like game of thrones you should give this a try from the way its developing i think courtyard politics is gonna be important and its not gonna be like normal novels where politics is important for two seconds before they just go back to survival of the fittest and mc just has a silver tongue and flawless analytical ability you need to give this a read if youre a fan of well written stories
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It’s good and all…. But want this the book that never had it’s ending?Sad really. Bit on wattpad and fanfic.net this master peace of action adventure, learning and of lemons and limes was never to be completed.
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