I’m already hooked. What a well written story!
Goes from 0 to Edgelord in no time flat. Not a fan of this story, the diction and writing weren’t bad though.
Please can you make a seperate auxiliary chapter for all the illustrations and maps you upload instead of in comment section of chapter . Would be really convenient . Thanks for the novel❤️❤️
It is a well written fictional historical novel with battles and maybe a rise to power of the MC. I think it's a kind of mix of the great Roman empire and the Middle Age. The story is very original compared to the same boring Chinese war/kingdom building/ historical novels. To conclude, in regard of what's already released, the best is yet to come.
I cannot say whether it is the writer or translator that is to blame, but this work needs help. Badly.Weak character design and poorly translated. Still unable to figure out what direction this story will take. From the story element changes from chapter to chapter it feels more 'crown sourced' than anything.
Maybe shameless of me to rate my own novel but oh well. I would like to go ahead and thank everyone that is and that will read my novel. I know that there will be mistakes, might get slow, or maybe even boring. But that is why I need you all to help me fix these mistakes and send me on the right path as a new writer, so please don't just outright hate on my wok and only give constructive criticism. Thank you again and I hope everyone enjoys reading.
Boring.. Trash.. No excitement on this novel.. Very plain... Mc Forcing building its own territory.. The title must not LORD OF THE MAGICAL BEAST but LORD OF THE MAGICAL BUGS...
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I'll try to keep this short this time, hehehe. You did a good job at portraying the main character. An Arrogant kid and immature, he was portrayed well and I commend you for that. Interesting concept you have made here, and your narration makes the story more easier to dive into. Anyways, great book you have here, keep up the good work
I really like it so far, please don't drop it ! EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp EXP exp exp
Vampires, Werewolves, Lycans, and Humans. A world full of fantasy! The story is well planned with selected mythical creatures. If you want a novel filled with exciting world background, here it is. The writing style is good, the story is great and the background is amazing!