Eclipse of Eternity with the falling star

After reading some other reviews and the author's own words I forced myself to read to chapter 21 before dropping it. The writing/grammar is kinda meh, but the storytelling is pretty good, the first person style of writing is really not my cup of anything and I just find it annoying. The characters are kinda meh so far. The male lead is your typical perverted shounen harem lead. As for how he will find a lifetime love while he is constantly thinking of boning every girl he meets, I have no clue, either way I feel bad for her already.

Why is everyone praising the synopsis? What's so special about it I don't get it at all. It just says short stories...This is a serious question is this a reference that I'm not getting or something? This is really weird.

For now well executed but watch out cuz it should continue. Hopefully you don't drown in making the mc too cringey with drunk humour. Too much ain't good but I see none for now. I like the idea of a drunken immortal(I always wanted to read more about an oddball wandering, mysterious mc). Finally the make or break moment for me. Is this harem or otp? or no romance?What ever the case good luck with your story.

I'll try to keep this short this time, hehehe. You did a good job at portraying the main character. An Arrogant kid and immature, he was portrayed well and I commend you for that. Interesting concept you have made here, and your narration makes the story more easier to dive into. Anyways, great book you have here, keep up the good work

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Start a kill fest through the empire. The empire is pissing me off starting from the princess.