When Devi passed to one of the rooms, she heard a familiar voice and her heart fluttered. She can't help but peek through the slightly opened door and saw Keit speak the same way as the guy who was speaking on her right earphone.
"Shoes, check. My lunch money, right here."
Itutuloy...
It was a normal day at The Moby Dick when it happened. Ace just finished his 'ritual' in 'trying to take Whitebeard's head' of the day, when The Boy appeared out of nowhere. One moment he wasn't there and the next moment he was there.
"Shit! How has nobody mention such an important piece of information." When Julius thought of his ignorance, he felt scared.
Years went by and Training had made them masters in the use of their powers, with daily spars and advice from century-old nobles and a scientist without peer it was a given, even the Noblesse had practised the use of his blood fruit to the point that he can use it unconsciously like another limb.
"What is it?" the fox girl said as she walked into the living room. Then she started laughing at the pair she pranked. The three bystanders let out a few chuckles of their own.
Thanks for the chapter.
Then as the civilians continued their conversation, a child with fluffy black hair and a long nose appeared.
"Heck no. Look at himself, Annie's practically head over heels for him but he's dense as f***." (Zack)
The plot is a generic cultivation novel. Not good or bad. Just average. The problem is that the MC’s “golden finger” is really inconsistent. Basically it changes to become OP or useless at random whenever the author needs it to advance the “plot.” I might forgive it if the plot was unique, but it’s not. So below average rating from me.
It has good potential, a cohesive and very fluid story, which doesn't give the impression that the author is pushing the protagonist.It's worth reading.