There is so much not going on it’s crazy. 80% system rewards seems low and the overall world building does not give you any reason to root for the MC. After 20 chapters, I was rooting for a guard.
Decent novel, Everyone makes it out to be a masterpiece but it's really not. There are grammar problems. The development is slow for my taste.Not much character design you don't know a lot about the character.Not much of any World background. You should work on grammar and the characters a lot more if you want to improve.
Dude, how is this an original novel. Its quality is way above that, equal to the top ranked Translated light novels. 140 characters — 140 characters — 140 characters
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So far I read, it's a great story, full of mysteries about Taylor and his strange dreams. As far I read, I think he has a system, plus his wicked dreams and gloomy personality. The writing quality gets better with chapters, and I want to know what is happening to Taylor, so I will add to my library and read it later.Good work author.
So far, this is a story about someone imprisoned for a crime that I honestly think is weird(but awesome!) The novel has done good so far in highlighting the Main characters emotions feelings, and I've seen more character growth in these few chapters than I have seen in hundreds of chapters for other novels. Read it, I assure you, it won't be dissapointing.
From time to time webnovel surprises me i think that's this is the most beta mc ever, then i will read another novel and what i tought to be the top beta will become some Giga chad in confront to the new and improved beta man ( in this case this novel).Soo where to start?This guy dies and is reincarnated in a world of magic. then dies again and is ressurected as an eternal slave. The little girl who kills him is like a name what do you need one to? from now on your name is zombie then in the next chapters he will be abused in all sorts of ways with insults beating and cutting of limbs. The mc? completly fine with it ( it seems that in the future he may also love her) he was a child when he was killed on the street, in daylight, his family forgotten by the killers ( they are nobles why should they care after all? )Later since the readers disliked the beta oh sorry the mc for being like: "Huh, so i am a slave? fine with me!" the author tried to patch it with an auxiliar chapter in which the beta will have his conscience rewritten by the system ( what whas the point on giving the mc a backstory since now he is no more than a husk?) so he can accept being a slave.this patch was worse tought at least to me ( slaves mc are a big no no, but forced rewritting of your conscience to be the perfect slave is an even bigger no no)*SLAPS NOVEL* This badboy contains so much beta energy that it can take a rocket to the moon and back
Well so far I am a chapter 53 by some miracle I won't lie I skipped quite the few paragraphs while reading didn't miss much on the essential understanding of the story if you're thinking it's going to be about the life of someone who becomes a wolf and all that sorry to disappoint it's a no the author didn't even do his research about wolves you can literally watch an hour video on YouTube about a wolfs act in the wild no understanding about a wolf's behavior and characteristics their instinct there census which are way better than human's the character personality and descriptions are contradicting each others in most of the chapters the guy is way too sentimental even f****** cries just because someone thanked him for saving their kid seriously ?he puts himself in situations that might endanger him which 95% of them are unnecessary if not all still attached to his humanity (when he was human he didn't have much of a good interaction with people and I only had one friend which died he wasn't a social person and didn't like being around people because they bullied him...) Would you get us to the point about his personality the author adds random feelings and emotions however he wants there is no rhythm in terms of how someone's personality works and develop is Jeff the author writing however he wants it today even if it's contradicts itself he even go to the point of making a contract with people he doesn't know contract which binds him just because of some guy he met in the dungeon for a couple of days and somehow become his friends which is stupid all in all it's a disappointment after another (author read some of the good review novels try to compare them with yours if you look from a neutral point of view you will see your mistakes hopefully) sorry in case of mistakes in my writing I'm using a voice writing app it translate what I say to writing sometimes it makes mistakes .
Just.. Stupid..3 years, nothing happens.. in 3 days the City Lord is trying to kill him..3 years, nothing happens.. in 3 days the MC's excuse's changes 5 times..3 years, nothing happens.. in 3 days the MC turns into someone else!?
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