This idea is so great; it was implemented so skillfully as well. There are not much inconsistencies so far and his cheat is quite acceptable, allowing much room for the potential of the story. Everything is quite balanced and reasonable and the story is quite immersive as well.Some scenes transmitted the feeling into real life, which was quite enjoyable (no, I don't have that kind of addiction), makes it a story of great quality.
I'll only sat this once but on the same day he wakes up not even 10 minets into it and he already starts raping his sister.And dident even care if he will die again.And coplains that he dosent want to go to that coprete orking hell he'll.But decided not to think rationally and to calm himself but to **** it and rape his suposed sister.He dident even think this is a new chance at life and I'll make the bomb shell of a sister mine but I need to know what's going on. Theres no of that. Only **** first think later.
If you are expecting this novel to be an otaku turned good looking. Who then starts to chase his dreams to become a kpop idol, while building a harem, its not. He goes to his first audition on chapter 41. for the first 40 chapters its a high school/slice of life/rom com. After chapter 41 it turns in to a slice of life/rom com, with more actual kpop stuff happening. The MC has a dream to have a harem but i think its just part of his mentality as an otaku, but the author is not going to give him that harem. So the MC just talks about it, but the harem wont happen. The author for what ever reason likes to make the MC brake the 4-rth wall and talk to the author. I don't really like it at all and i'm not the only one that does. But if you read this novel and also find the 4-rth wall braking annoying just do what i did and skip those parts and pretend they never existed to begin with.I'm not one to really like romantic comedy's or slice of life's since they are always slow paced and boring to me. But this one is not bad, i don't hate it, But its not my favorite. it is extremely slow paced in the beginning when it comes to the MC actually chasing his dreams and not just have it as a dream till many chapters later. The chapter lengths are allover the place. Some chapters are 3,000 words while others are 800 words.
Please put a tag as a racism so readers know it beforehand.Also promoting a dumb racist MC in the story.Don't know how webnovel couldn't get a decent novel instead of these craps.
This is just frustrating to read. First, all of the character names are mismatches of someone google searching "top 20 American first names" and "top 20 American last names". It is super frustrating to read when every single character has a name that I would expect to see as a place holder on a police report involving minors. Second is that it absurdly draws out conflicts. It is a constant seesaw between the MC getting harassed and then getting some form of minor revenge. There is also an absurd focus on side characters, even their POVs, considering we can be sure they aren't going to play any major role outside of the current conflict they are involved in with the MC. Speaking of conflict, this is another majorly frustrating aspect. The MC is described as a hardworking, kind, and loyal man. The entire novel is just him being defecated on repeatedly.
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This novel is amazing, I usually read content with lots of fights, but in 40 chapters I fell in love with this, it's a slice of life that has cultivation around it, but the greater focus is in the relationship the protagonist has with other characters, their personalities are all well built, the story makes sense and is captivating. There are tids and bits of comedy but also lots of sweet moments throughout it, I guess there will be fights once the protagonist reaches a certain level of power, but for now, only trivial things bothered him, to a level where anyone could experience the same thing. Give this story a go, fights and near death situations are not the only quality content out there.
Interesting plot ruined by garbage grammar, MR. and Mrs in a time where that wasnt used at all. Separating conversations in different lines makes things difficult to read or enjoy.Then out of nowhere character just forgets his mannerisms and attitudes of five years and start acting like he was in the old life which is crap,Then out of nothing, just thin air, he finds out he has hipnotic powers activated by eye contact, which he never tried before or found by mistake. And suddenly the story turned into obey me at all times kind of garbage.I do not recommend story.Esta novela es una mierda. El autor sigue separando las conversaciones lo que hace leer esta basura mas dificil y me quita las ganas de continuar.El autor sigue utilizando MR y MRs como si eso fuera utilizado en los tiempos romanos.Y para culminar esta diarrea de novela, el autor decidio de la nada que el personaje tiene un poder de hipnosis cuando mira a la gente en sus ojos. Un poder que nunca sabia que tenia ni que habia practicado ni que por error habia activado.En resumen esto es una churrada de novela por un autor novato sin sentido de comun ni un poco de buscar informacion para ver como eran las cosas en esos tiempos. No leas.
After reading the first 3 chapters, I really love this novel and want to see its future. There is romance, action, kindgombuilding material in this novel.
There are lot of people badmouthing about the main characters way of fighting and characters but let me tell you this novel is absolutely great. Apart from the fact that main character doesn't want to get along with his family every thing is perfect and it is much much better that SUPER GENE.It is worth reading.
Has creative juices to work for more.
I'm going to be honest with you—the middle section where they go furniture shopping is where I almost skimmed. And I don't say that lightly because I was genuinely invested in the kids' storyline. But the author makes a smart choice here: instead of rushing into the Ye Shuwei confrontation, we get this domestic interlude that actually serves a purpose. The shopping trip does three things simultaneously. First, it establishes Lin Tingwan as a practical woman who immediately starts assessing what the house needs—wardrobe size, kitchen supplies, bedding. Second, it shows their dynamic in action: she picks, he carries. Third, and this is the genius part, it creates dramatic irony. We KNOW something is about to happen at the house, and the author lets us sit in that tension while they're obliviously buying low cabinets. Then—cut to the kids. Ye Shuwei arrives. The manipulation begins. And just when we're fully invested in that horror, the cars pull into the compound and we get the confrontation. The pacing here is almost cinematic. The author could have rushed straight to the Ye Shuwei scene, but instead chose to let us breathe before the storm hits. Smart. The chapter ending on 'Why is there a woman in her house?!' with Lin Tingwan's internal panic is a solid cliffhanger. Not overdone, not melodramatic—just the right amount of 'what happens next.'