so so so cool?when is the continue?can't wait...so interested what will be next...author you are so talented...I really like your novel?it's the best novel which I read)
I feel that this isn't ready for prime time. The translation is all over the place, with wrong words, incorrect grammar nand punctuation, and more. It is hard to get into the story with these barriers in the way. The author has an interesting story, but it is overshadowed by the poor translation/writing.
Hi got the suggestion of this book from a book fighting destiny about this book and others.I'm new to the world to novels but this book is simply amazing .i wish it wasn't too short though.?
this novel makes me think of the original "Chrysalis". except that the latter is free and much more advanced ... on the other hand, there are more comedies in it which may displease ...otherwise, since I have to rate this novel, it looks promising. So I hope to be able to read more ^^
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Hello guys, Kyosei here, I know my update stability is very very slow that I am honestly not sure what to do about it. It might take me a while before I reach the 100th chapter but bear with me. The chapters will be slow for a while in this novel because all my attention was focused on my contracted novel. I have to earn money or I can't pay for my expenses every day. I also have work I need to focus on so I am quite having a hard time writing a single chapter and if I have to push myself, I ended up sleeping due to fatigue. But once I finish the Chat group for Magicians, the updates will be frequent again. Thanks for everyone that still sticks around.
Another GREAT novel by Adui! .
First off, I really appreciate the high quality translation done on this novel! I like being able to seemlessly read through the novel without wondering about grammar mistakes or seeing excessive translation notes that interrupt the flow of the novel. The novel started off differently than I expected and has been progressing quite well. There is a lot to wonder about in the novel, and I’m always excited about each new chapter. I’m pulled into the world created by the author and the plot that revolves around the main character. I look forward to each update on this novel!
Good story hope you don't drop it .
Request for raw. Need it to feel the power to read nice things. Lately I feel that the novels I read are very uninteresting so I need to feel empowered.
Interesting premise, we'll see if it actually works out in the end or if it'll get dropped or become premium and then dropped. Feeling up space trying to make the review more than 140 characters