Na'eemah shrugged "She's crazy from what I heard. It's possible that instead of giving punishment to those in her underworld she chooses to torture those in Hell since that's what they are there for. Look at you sounding concerned about not misjudging people."
"Umm...hello..?" clearing his throat, said Wang Tao with the friendliest smile he could muster on his face as he waved at the girl
1 chapter/week0 new chapters in the last 2 monthsIm starting to dislike qidian for their irresponsibility with the realesesOnly 30 chapters to end...ffs get someone to finish.And stop starting new random and stupid novels while dropping the old ones
I won't comment on the grammar and spelling mistakes, since many have already spoken about it. It's amazing how someone can take a good idea for a very good plot and turn it into such a horrible novel. The romance for the MC and the Female Lead is as dumb as possible. He tries to make it an epic romance, but fails terribly. Either they are apart because the FL is a dumb b*tch, or the are together with the FL whining and complaining about the MC. And the poor bastard just takes it, over and over again. This whole idea is so plain stupid that the MC nearly sacrifices his life for the FL so many times, and the times he needs help she is never around because she needs to be stronger for the MC. What is the point of that if she is never around when he needs it?! On the other hand we have another love interest that practically killed herself to save the MC, that stands by him, supports him, understands him, but NO!! The FL has to be the romance for the MC. It gets so annoying that I find myself wishing the stupid spoiled FL to just die. I honestly think the author must have had a really screwed up relation in his past to think of love as he does. Whatever that is, it's not love, neither here nor in hell!!The characters generally are well written, meaning the are not 2 dimension characters. they have their own backgrounds, reasons, hopes, etc. The issue here is that the author spends as much time writing about the side characters as he spends on the MC. And he keeps on jumping perspectives. One moment we are following the MC doing something important, and then we are watching some non important character doing a monologue about how beautiful the sky is. The time jumping also is a bit too much. Time travelling is supposed to be either impossible or prohibited by the higher powers, but every few chapters we find another time traveler, or someone with memories about the future. The really good parts about this novel is when we are following the MC. He is a decently written character, besides his stupidity in romance and the main love interest. But regarding his "cultivation" an advancement the chapters are pretty interesting. And the challenges he faces are well done as well. Besides correcting the grammar and spelling (FIND AN EDITOR!!) and slowing down the changes of perspectives, all the author would need is a realistic romance or no romance at all and the story would improve drastically...
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A very hilarious novel that I definitely recommend to read. Looking forward to mkre chapters!
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wish it was a harem , sad degenerate noises
Great novel but my only complaint is the short chapters. I mean at the very least write 1000-1200 words per chapter.~ a guy from No romance and no harem gang
Please DOnt ... Dont ..... Dont Make the MC way too overpowered way too Soon .... And try too add innocent LOve interests .... The less bitchs the better .... No simps ... and a bit serious if possible .. You’ve picked a good subject though ❤️
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Good start, the story seems to make sense so far. There are a few minor grammatical and tense errors but it didn't take away from the feel of the story. It just needs a little editing and it will be fine! I like how the author describes things in unique ways that bring objects or people to life.I'm not a big fan of detective novels but I will keep an eye out for this one! I see a lot of potential! I'm excited to find out how Alistair will solve the case of his parents' death and future cases to come!