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Nice read! Not too much if an info dump. Some mistakes here there, but very descriptive. Like how it fits the age of the main character. Looking forward for more.
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Honestly a rough read. The events don't really flow together, it seems to cut and jump. MC gets to do whatever he feels like because he is the MC. I think he could even be considered a Mary Sue
The author of this novel must have a strong inclination with math subject! Anyway, the concept is good. Please continue updating. I hope to see this novel be completed!
Like it.. One of the novel here that i enjoyed reading. Not those novels where you can't stop reading once you starts but its pretty close, especially if you loved kingdom building. Overall above average i just rate it higher for now coz i know for myself what i enjoyed and want to share it to others.. To the Author: Cant really give a constructive feedback about this book im not really into it, but so far so good and thank you hope you improve it more?
Terrible, terrible pacing. Although well written nothing really happens. There's too much exposition and too little story. I could last only until chap. 70 before dropping. By then, the MC is still a 10 year old kid that doesn't really do anything. There's a lot of world building and characters interaction, but they're boring and mundane. Simple things that could be described in 3 paragraphs are stretched to 3 whole chapters. The author seems to have wanted to make a harry potter meets douluo dalu but couldn't pull it of.
In one chapter he launched an attack and turned all five opponents into a bloody mist. Then the next chapter the commander is miraculously alive after being turned into a bloody mist and leads his sect to attack. I think that should set you expectations for this novel.
all 5 ?.world background is 3 ? because it has china & eagle kingdom racist disappointed ? & disagreement ? a very little but it's there....rest is good not over the top comedy or romance but rest is ok ?
A frustratingly bad novel, steer clear of this. I can't be bothered to write too much about this so my descriptions are going to be very short but just trust me, this novel is rubbish. The prison is dumb. The sects are dumb. The plot is really dumb. This whole novel is just a poorly written mess and even if I did want to give more specific criticism I wouldn't know where to start because it's just that dumb. The ability was passable but that doesn't matter when everything else is trash.A frustrating mess without a shred of originality, how this is popular in China boggles my mind. I'm now certain that those guys have lower standards than the average webnovel user and that's no small feat. I'm giving this the score it deserves because this novel wasn't just not enjoyable but actually really annoying to read. 0/5
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