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Shameless Author here, with a shameless review.
I wrote a novel recently, which is Reincarnate as Prince:Change Magical World with Industry. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly.
Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you!
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So this novel is essentially China when they realized they could just copy the rest of the world if they closed their country off?
Welcome to China, a place where all foreign companies are banned so that people can make foreign copycats of that company and keep all of the money within the country only to put half of it into the state’s pockets.
They even have copycat architecture. Eiffel Tower? Yep, they’ve got it. London Bridge? Got that one too. Wait, are these even profitable? Well, who cares because copying is too ingrained into them they can’t do anything else!
Just the right kind of pace and story progression for me, not to fast and not to slow.
trialread webnovel novels nowadays are of poor quality, it's either it's poorly translated or the plot is not consistent and is confusing, repeated chapters etc
the whole trilogy lets you experience the journey of the mc. where in the author fantastically executed her wonderful ideas in the novel. the character is humane, you can feel them as if they exist. world building is top notched. the plot twist gets you engaged in the story and it lets you feel immerse throught out the series. the ending leave us readers satisfied and happy. all in all this is a masterpiece trilogy, i would like to see this as a movie.
Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try!
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This book.isn't for me.the prologue is too long.and i thought that there was a japanese vibe going on.unfortunately the author.did not capture.that vibe.as for the structure of the story it's bland.and boring. and very VERY scripted.i can't feel the emotions of the characters it's as if it is forced. the personalities of the characters is also forced. your grammar is somewhat tolerable but know how to use proper words in a sentence. as well as proper commas and periods. NOT JUST THAT but fix the broken words of the sentences those are making me cringe so much. i was excited when i saw this book but my excitement turned into instant dissapointment. i also read what the author said. you apologise for your mistakes but your apology doesn't validate.to anything if you don't fix it.
Your writing just lacks.professionalism.i'm sorry to say. it's as if.a kid wrote it. and yet a children's book is more fun than this.
i rarely give.5.0 star but to those who earned and deserve it.
right now.this book is 2-3 stars in my view.
for a first-time writer, this book is amazing. I love it soo far and I am excited to see how this book comes out. Keep updating it. Hope this book becomes a success!!!
A hidden gem that shines with darkness captivating its audience the more you read, sending a shiver down your spine at the dark writing style. The action is fantastic, the characters interesting, and I don't just mean the main one. While there is some spelling error, nothing is lost and could be easily fixed. I really look forward to more releases.
Love it man keep up the good work just please update more frequently please I'm bagging you
Give it a shot, the book is really well written and has a fluid story.
One morning I started reading it and read everything that was available at the time.
World seems really well thought and characters have really good interactions between themselves, nothing seems forced and it really leaves you wanting MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAR.
