Amazing read.
I've read the authors other book as well, so there is no problem in writing quality.
only 15 chaps in and i am hooked!
I like the mc, even though he is called a loser, he is actually not.
even before he got his cheat, he is a genius.
world background is modern setting.
overall,
it's a good book.
give it a readddd
i don't care how the good this book is
BUT THE PROBLEM IS the protagonist is TRAP!!!
and there is no warning anywhere saying mc is trap which something most such writers atleast mention somewhere
totally ruined my time ,here i thought i would be have a enjoyable read .
sigh
P S even if u delete this review atleast put it in discription that the protagonist is a trap so atleast u won't ruin other readers mood or waste their time
Let's get this story to the top 10, where it belongs!
The writing is so well made, I can clearly tell how much the author invests in each individual chapter.
The protagonist is one of those rare, *****/slightly silly. I enjoy reading his monologues and I find myself relating better to characters such as himself.
As for the male lead? Where do I even start? An all powerful Spirit King = Absolutely clueless, senseless man. He's adorable!
I'm glad I chanced upon this novel, I'll definitely be handing my power stones for every chapter released.
*cough* Moar chapterz plz *cough*
Angelic System More like Devil System legit kills someone for disrespect
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I’m sorry if it’s not but this just seems like a rip of of After Transformation, Mine and Her Wild Fantasy? Like the premise tho so I’ve rated it pretty high just the world and characters seem a bit off to me
Don't let the low chapter count fool you, each chapter though short has more story than 5-10 normal chapters.
This story might give you whiplash from how quickly it develops. So 80 chapters actually equals 800 of another novel.
Other than a problem with pacing the story is epic and full of imagination.
Hold on to your hat, because mine blew away!!
I like the way you wrote when the MC confused between die or life. Every chapters why your MC is unique hahaha. I cannot stop laughing especially when he entered the New Wold.So far the plot is interesting, especially about the MC lol[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Honestly I’ve loved what I’ve read so far and as long as the Quality stays the same or at least doesn’t get that much worse I won’t stop reading it I’ve been looking for something with this concept for a while that’s good enough for me to want to read it long term
I made this review at chapter 198
Hello, the author here! So, this second review is posted after 200 chapters! What a crazy thing. The other review has some things wrong, so I'm here to correct them and to tell you about other new things.
Firstly, I wanted to thank all of you who have read my novel, we are almost at one million views, and I can't believe it. Thank you, dears.
Second, the schedule is actually daily at 21:00 UTC+2. You can easily search how to compare it with your local hour on Google.
Next, I wanted to say that I've edited the first ten chapters or so, so the grammar is a little bit rough after that point, but I would say that it is readable. Later, I made massive improvements.
Following that, this story has a LIMITED harem. The main character won't go collecting women like trophies and cares about all of them dearly. They are also a big part of the story and won't be left behind and forgotten. They all complement each other, creating a healthy relationship between them.
Also, there are only Female on Female relationships; there isn't any romantic situation with males.
Finally, Any other question you have, you can ask here or in my comment. Thank you for reading this, and I hope you can try my novel and follow Yasenia's adventures in a cultivation world that is slightly different from the norm.
...I hope I didn't forget anything.