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Nice writing style, great story development Has the ability to make one engrossed in the chapters. I love the characters, how the author is able to depict them vividly was simply brilliant
stupid main character with no structure. he shows his talent,stats all of them to guys who he has just met. I kinda got it that author is trying to put realism in it and I liked that but showing talent and your stats out easily is just utterly stupid. I mean any normal guy out there won't do it.
You can see the dedication and talent of the author when writing. I have just read XIETIAN's other novel and I can say that everything he writes always has a reason. Even the smallest word is important.
If you want to read an interesting story, I certainly recommend this novel a lot.
My Beloved readers.
From the bottom of my heart I apologize for this message but I am no longer going to keep updating my book.
It is a bittersweet decision but one that I must make. Between working three jobs, heavy criticism, lack of motivatIon and trying to find sleep, I Have no time to write or update the book.
I am so sorry To any one who actually liked the story.
SPOILER ALERT
To give closure to like that one fan of my book I will share with you what I had planned.
Em and Ventus would reunite and defend against the mini War force trying to attack sulpa
With all 5 of Quinn’s Disciples dead, the constraints on her true and most powerful follower. He was going to wreck everyone as He was madly in love with quinn and would take everyone out in her name. Through the combined efforts of Lakia, Phinn, Sam, Em, Ven, and SB they would overcome and move to fight Quinn.
She tried to wreck them but they whoop her And Em deals the final blow.
[Insert Story]
Fate dies some how…Had not spent much Time since she was my least fav.
Xavier comes in just to stomp on everyone,
Phinn is mad because Xavier is abusing his daughter.
He gets killed by Xavier but not before entrusting her to Em.
Em gets a power boost and all his old abilities back when he gets his soul back.
Our heros move to 99th floor determined to kill the final king.
They get wrecked.
SB sacrifices himself to Save Em and Ven by transcending into the Great Slime God Sir Blob.
Round 2 with xavier happens and they overcome him.
In a dark twist, the great evil manifests and defeats the Master Of Shadows, opening up the door straight to floor 100.
Em and Ven go
Only to realize that the final ones to kill are this great Evil Who not only took over the body of the forgotten champion but also corrupted Autumn.
After an epic fight everyone dies leaving Em alone and with a choice. He can go home to earth and Leave behind everything he fought against and Betray the memories of those who entrusted salvation to him or he can pick up the Mantel of the great evil and start the cycle again just as he had done so in order for a better outcome.
(He was the evil all along whaaaaaaaat)
Anyway lame story sorry to have made you read it.
20 chapters and I'm already immersed in the story and very good translation, I didn't see any error so far. The chapters are also longer compared to other novels. So please get chosen asap cause I never put this much effort in promoting a novel ever since, Divine Card Creator before.
tldr; novel good, please read it :)
just read the novel...The First Order ................,...................................,..................,...................................,..
Muy prometedor, posiblemente de lo mejor de esta tanda de novelas, actualmente voy en el capítulo 20 y a la espera de más..................................,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,
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If you like Buddha's Palm but want more actual buddhist you'll like this novel. So far a great read and setting up an interesting future-------------------
the start ruined the whole thing
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