Let me take a minute to process everything..... This was nice! A whole new level kind of nice! A heart tearing kind of nice that left us, readers, feeling emotional and passionate and...man I'm so touched. This is a one in a million kind of nice.
You did a good job there author! I wish you luck on your writing journey! I look forward to more of your incoming chapters. Hands raised to you! Keep up the good work!
Well everything's fine for me but it would be better if you can makes him/her less of an airhead. Great job, please keep up the work!
Thank you for your hard work.
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Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
i love fantasy and i am glad that this novel did great in the story telling with a captivating first chapter with its vividly described fantasy setting. dear author, although as you say it is your first book, it seems that you are already so good at attracting readers with your novel. best of luck and keep writing ?
The chapters are jumbled and the story changes abruptly and is hard to find the original and it also deviates from the original raws. The story is a Frankenstein of multiple good novels, for example "My senior brother is too steady". Its story and character development is extremely similar, but sadly where the other novel prospered this novel fails. If the author or the site decides to stop updating new chapters and put some effort into reworking the novel then it might still be salvageable.
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This comment has nothing to do with the novel but after seeing the word halo, it made me reminisce about when i use to play halo reach when i was younger
DONT BOTHER TO READ ITMC gets his body taken over in over 1000+ chapters and he starts again with no dimension, no bloodline, no beast, jsut crippled body, all his efforts gone down the drain because of some stupid decisions, the "Dayus" player he bashed and beat up schemed against him which led to his body being taken over, he lsot everything and probably gonna take 300 chapters to recover everything, so basically, the story(chapter1-1250), filler(1251-1400+).
I am here why?? Because I can relate with the name of the book. "All time marksman."
Im shamelessly writing myself another review since webnovel hates putting my stories in the algorithm. YOU CANT STOP ME WEBNOVEL!!!
This novel is a breath of fresh air in many ways.
The grammar’s a ****y bit weaker than some, but that hardly affects the experience.
You’ll find that the author, Suiyan, has a fetish for mass releases (don’t think of anything dirty).
The story progresses nicely on a slowly quickening rate. From the first few chapters to the latest, you’ll always find tidbits to enhance your knowledge on what the core plot is. Does he have to reach the peak of the world? Save his loved one? Save his race? Extend his life span enough to not die? The answer is: Yes.
Like I said, it’s a breath of fresh air, and the same goes for the characters. You don’t have that faultless main character that never does bad, or commits mass genocide and goes “I won’t let the world walk over me” or something of the like. Here, our MC, Krune is genuinely good, not from his character description, but rather his actions. While he comes of as a little wimpy, character development that sees him taking on new, and the cliched shameless trait exist. But, this only enhances the comedy, ‘cause the Novel is easily top three in comedy. The side characters, while kinda generic at the beginning, diversify in their characters later on. This, also, is a plus.
For world background, you have a literal multiverse and a higher realm, but the plot never feels like it’s larger than its current setting. To me, that would mean that if he’s in a village, you could get knowledge on the cities, but the readers don’t immediately focus on what happens after he leaves the village, but rather the village itself. I’m not entirely sure what constitutes an amazing background, but I think it’s good enough if it’s there and doesn’t overshadow the foreground before it’s the main focus. Nonetheless, the world is expansive with the author not only expanding on it based on size/location but also based on how the people’s views change in the different parts. Or at the very least confirming that it won’t just be a cliche “go to city, go to competition, go to school, offend big guy run away, find something useful, repeat steps one to five with a ‘capital state’ rather than ‘city’, goes back to city and floor the big guy before we forget about him.” Krune is not the type that lets conflict dictate his worldview.
All in all, it’s a great, kinda lighthearted read. I love it. Hope you try it if you’re reading this.