The Perks of Being Stuck in the Middle - Reviews

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MC terlalu idiot, tidak sesusai caracter. Cerita bukan Tag Villain tetapi lebih ke Tag Anti-Pahlawan. Ngga ada kesadaran diri, padahal udah tau keadaan masa depan tetapi tidak dimanfaatkan. Pengalaman MC prolog berhasil membunuh raja binatang abadi harusnya ada pengalaman selama itu tetapi di cerita MC terlalu idioit seakan tidak ada pengalaman sama sekali

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As of the first chapter, the plot and storyline is good. A few grammatical errors here and there but that doesn't bother much. I'd like to see how this story progresses. Keep writing!

Great novel but my only complaint is the short chapters. I mean at the very least write 1000-1200 words per chapter.~ a guy from No romance and no harem gang

"Dear, the best way to solve any problem, especially of the undead variety, is a hammer." I was told half jokingly.

     "Kalau begitu aku pulang dulu." ucapnya yang sudah bergerak cepat meraih tas tentengnya. Aish.. Seharusnya aku tidak perlu membawa tas ini. Diiringi debaran jantungnya, Yoona melangkah cepat melewati koridor, menuruni anak tangga dan akhirnya berhasil kembali kedalam mobilnya. "huh.." ia gugup bukan main. "tunggu, terus kenapa jaketnya ada padaku?" baru ia sadari itu.

All of the citizen must obey and loyal to me, and ready to sacrifice for the kingdom. They must learn to love this country and prepare for the any threat and war to protect this nation. I using authoritarian systems, which the most exclusive rights and powers hold by me. I like to introduce the democracy systems, but maybe in later part of my reigns. The next individual who hold the power after me is Rosellete. She will be number two here, and I given her a noble title, Prime as the honor of her service. The high status and ranked individuals in my country must taken an oath curse from Esthia or directly become my slaves. Only normal citizens can be allowed not to do the both, but they will never have same privilege like them.

Melody:  only 2 minutes have passed and...

Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?

Unsealing some equipment used for sealing, from one of the travel scrolls he brought, as well as creating twenty clones, each trying out different designs that might work. Luckily, the right configuration would resonate with his chakra, or at least that was what Tobirama's notes said, as it was the reason a flying thunder god user could feel where their marks were.