So far I really like it. The progression of the story and the characters are organic. The grammar is good. The powersystem and world is pretty unique. There is inspiration from Lotm and Red Rising, but it's over 90% still originell. The novel hasn't that many Ch's so far. However I'll give this story 5 stars for now, 'cause I believe that it has the potential to be, and stay a story that' s worth the read. So far so good author. Keep the motivation you have and do even better!
