Immortal Asura - Reviews

im getting some serious deja vu rn, oh wait it's a complete copy pasta of someone else's work. go figure. and he actually made it locked at ch.6 LOL

This book has a very unique plot. At first the title made me grin, not knowing what to expect, but the idea is really cool. The scenes are nicely built and the author posesses a broad vocabulary and a lot of imagination.Keep up the good work! :)

Very good harem story! But you forgot Rias! The demon empress! Where is she author! And you didn’t even mention the names of the archangel wives that he has, You didn’t mention End being in the final session that they have and her children. Besides, in the beginning of the story, you mentioned that he has more than 40 wives, not including the new ones, so who are they and where are they author? And as the greatest being in his universe, Kai should be able to revive the dead ones including Lana and Kana, which just died years after he came back. It should be possible for him to fish them up in the river of time(I added this assuming there should be one). It is really a very good story and very exciting to see Kai rise up from the mortal realm to the highest realm he could reach but you could have made a better epilogue mentioning all of his wives and not forgetting  a single one of them. Pleaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeee!!! Make epilogue 2.0 for the forgotten wivesssss.

This novel is very very good... aside from the first 5 chapters. it states that the mc did some messed up things, like cucking his brother, but were never given any description of it and its only briefly mentioned in one sentence. If you can get through the first 5 chapters, this book is definitely worth the read.

For anyone who wishes to read this novel, IT IS NOT IN ENGLISH. I'm not sure why the synopsis is but the book itself is not. I hope the author can translate this to English or find someone who can help them do this

This sounds alright has anyone got the raws for this novel ..................................???????????????????????ggghhhhhhbnjgggh God dam the 150 character rule

I got a friend who recommended me this book and darn he was right! This book is filled with so many mysteries and so many thrills! Cant wait for the future updates!

Awesome story with a solid characters and plot! You have an excellent grasp of language with your description that makes reading the story enjoyable to read. Keep Updating, you're doing a great job!

Xiulan curled her lips and showed Dong Yong a piece of paper with words written on it "Isn't it pitiful for them to know their only hope to get out of there will just disappear?"

Something crashes onto the ground almost in front of them, created a crater and a big dust cloud. It made the ground shook that made Blank almost fall the ground. "Whoa, alright there Blank?" ["Yeah, just almost got me off the ground."]

Dami's house was as loud as a party. The music coming from it drowned the sound of the torrential rain that Uyi was escaping from outside. As he neared the front door which he saw thrown wide open, he imagined the sitting room full of Dami's jobless friends. But he walked in and found Dami alone, dancing to Neyo's Let Me Love You with a body that was created to move to any beat. She grinned when she saw him but she didn't stop. She invited him over. He hesitated but she walked to him and drew him in. He wanted to be a spectator and he told her as much, shouting above the loud speakers to be heard. She shook her head and asked him to dance along, teaching him a few moves. Uyi laughed, saying he had two left feet but she shoved her hand down his jeans and her tongue through his lips. Immediately being fueled by her and because he had the brain of a genius, he tried the steps she showed him and got them correctly. And though he didn't bust the moves like she did, he eased into a rhythm with her effortlessly.

" it's okay. Good night! See you tomorrow "yujin replied