Immortal Asura - Reviews

Body: Human

Sutra dari Sepuluh Roda Bodhisatvva Ksitigarbha: "Daya tahan yang tenang seperti bumi. Tenang merenungkan sedalam penyimpanan dalam. "Jadi, nama yang diambil adalah 'Ksitigarbha', yang berarti 'penyimpanan tanah'.

"Pfft! HAHAHAHAHA! Man, you're ridiculous! That kind of stories still exist? Hahaha! Come on, man."

One of the greeb shards seemed to be bouncing between the others, driving them away from Superman.

own level has a extraordinary potential, however to unlock the potential

i like revenge and reborn kind of book and ur book looks interesting . waiting for more updates keep it up

I think so far i like the concept of the story, it feels very peaceful and calm (although i only read up to chapter 10) the pizza section caught me off guard but in a good way. The writing is also pretty decent coming from someone whom english is third language. Overall pretty solid start.

hello, I am the shameless author here. please let me know what you guys think about this and how I can improve, it will be helpful for me as this is my first novel and I don't know what people think about my novel. I am planning to create a huge world with many universes and upper-dimensional scenarios.