Cardinal Rule - Reviews

I don't know if the author read the reviews or the comments, I only have one desire from you author, that is to improve your skill in writing and language. That's it, not much. Why? Because there are still a lot of mistakes in each chapters.Sigh......

sounds like a INSANE novel jfyrgsgrhdhfhdhdthrhdjfbfbgbfbfjgngjgjgjtjtktktfhtuyjthtvfhfhfjdbhffvvvcbbfvbfccnvccbbbgghggvbbvvvbbfh

Meh, too long winded. took eight chapters to do something that could easily be achieved in three. Other than that, story’s pretty good but still wont bother seeing how it develops

its rare to find good taming novels, give this one a go and you'll be suprised??..........................................................

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great novel so far. I hope the author doesn't change his way of writing or place characters recklessly. All in all, a beautiful novel that I will follow.

I liked this novel very much although the MC is weird but it creates a lot of funny situations and dialogues ??. The story is also good. Its really keeps the person hooked as MC smart deduction really surprises u sometimes. The story also progresses well

Hennloo!! This is the author, I just wanna leave a disclaimer stating that Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy the story!!

overall great prologue and great story building steady characters and reasonable direction. the names threw me off at first but got used to them and overall great story so far and great writing i see nothing wrong. good job

it was like that they were actually the lords of universes who got together

second he was made as a clone with the DNA left over in a sealed vault as a crypt of heroism with no memorys and bad luck to have a shit poor grand ending between mutants and humans.

"Are you making fun of me?"