Cardinal Rule

I don't know if the author read the reviews or the comments, I only have one desire from you author, that is to improve your skill in writing and language. That's it, not much. Why? Because there are still a lot of mistakes in each chapters.Sigh......

sounds like a INSANE novel jfyrgsgrhdhfhdhdthrhdjfbfbgbfbfjgngjgjgjtjtktktfhtuyjthtvfhfhfjdbhffvvvcbbfvbfccnvccbbbgghggvbbvvvbbfh

Meh, too long winded. took eight chapters to do something that could easily be achieved in three. Other than that, story’s pretty good but still wont bother seeing how it develops

its rare to find good taming novels, give this one a go and you'll be suprised??..........................................................

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great novel so far. I hope the author doesn't change his way of writing or place characters recklessly. All in all, a beautiful novel that I will follow.