Cardinal Rule - Reviews

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Midway through the sentence I noticed that it was a different slime from before. His 'life force' was very different from the other slime that had come in. Looking at life force was a special ability that we ancient vampires had developed in order to look into how strong a creature was.

Her silky long blonde hair that reaches her waist. Her deep-set chocolate brown eyes looked at you like a puppy dog. The girl had a pixie-like nose that dropped daintily down from its peak. Her Cupid's-bow red lips curved unhappily which Su Yun found cute that makes him want to take a bite. Dimples were pressed under her high cheekbones.  She stood gracefully with her nurse outfit that added a sexiness to her irresistible body.

"Sucker Father, I go."

      I heared screaming of all my friends from they door by door that we passed, it's not just a scream, it's a song, a suffer song, a song of freedom desire, the unwanted chained, a song that only us can understand.

"Sorry sir, a little incorrect, I mean 12 months".

This book looks intriguing and I’ve added it to my library.. will definitely read this!

Its a great story if someone is into a little villainous MC.My personal favourite chapter till now has been chapter 351, Julian and Gregoria going at each other was something very exciting, it was like a challenge game going on from a proper NTR manga, I would have loved that there was expansion of that theme into the scene but no worries.Good plot, good world creation, good characters, a little more could be done on progression but overall a good read for people who like R18 fantasy novels.

Good enough to start with but hope the Author will improve in the time being, the character development is good but somewhat sudden and the status window is typical but good. some aspects could be looked over, maybe make it more fast paced but its your choice, you do yours

I was very skeptical about this story. It was amazing from the start and waiting  for more chapters ...