It’s a good novel with a ton of potential, i hope to see a lot more of it in the future. The setting is fairly unique and the grammer/ wording of the novel is good.
[Up until chapter 23]Deleted my other review cause it was trash compared to what I'll say now.Nothing needs to be said cause this is just that good.An absolutely lovely read you have to try out no questions asked.Author well written ?
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The story is good, if it was to be rated out of 10 I woulda given it a 6, my only issue is the mc himself and his harem member, I can ignore my dislike for harem in general but the problem is how the mc is written and also how some of the harem members are gotten. you will understand what I mean when you read up to ch 9, I dont exactly know how to explain cus I dont want to think right now. But from what iv read so far it has potential. this is some the past me would enjoy whole heartedly, but it seems the more variety of novels I've read the more difficult it is to be overly impressed. this is something that a new reader can start on and would definitely like. Its okay. Also it's weird how some of the other characters are written better than the protagonist.
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some might think the mc has no personality I'm ok with that , after reading countless young master MCs this novel is a breadth of fresh air , a great novel to improve your mood
Good system novel , writer has given a clear story line, Characters a relatable I enjoyed the book. looking forward to reading more in future.
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LOVE IT great story !! No repeated plot, no plot hole as far as i can see. Interesting plot with a bit 18+ spice there
The synopsis does not do the novel justice. This novel is a refreshing change from all the usual face slapping, overpowered characters and extremely retarded antagonists. The novel is set in a modern era with something akin to a medical system (which has not been fully unlocked yet) it takes on a slightly mysterious and supernatural tone with some hints to a relation to some beings from HP Lovecraft. The pacing of the novel is good as you can feel the development of the characters and the world as you learn more about them whilst keeping mysteries and questions to be answered at the end of each development. The side characters per say are also decently fleshed out. At first i read the synopsis and was going to skip the novel however after reading it I am completely hooked, i suggest that you read the 40 free chapters before you make your decision on this novel. Hope it gets chosen to get translated looking forward to more
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It was alright until you added romance! Like come on, not every novel needs a harem or love at all! All the people who add romance are just thirsty losers!