Interesting to read, even if I think that the charakterdevolopment isn´t really my type.........................................................................
It's a fast paced love horror novel. by the end of chapter one you'll already hit bit of a dark point where the guy is basically in a difficult spot.
I recommend reading this if you're in need of seeing people die.
Bad grammar. hurts my eyes when there are no punctuations.
Stupid MC, Naive, gullible, idiotic, not intelligent, low EQ.
terrible at describing things, No plot, bad plot for the sake of story progression, Low level NPC, English names in an indian kingdom, only the MC has indian name.
The system is glitching, has many errors, inferior system, Experience is wrong, shows less stat points
overall the story is good. the funny plot not so forced and not lame at all. the interesting part is about the cultivation itself. but the story need more details about the world and surrounding environtment so the imagination of the reader can be perfect when reading it. overal it's good novel and worth to spend your coins on it. i hope i can read next chapter....
Great book! Well done author. I will keep it in my library and read all the updates. Please update soon and dont make me wait too long! A true gem!
if any of this was original I would give this a higher review but overall it's extremely generic and lacks in certain areas. you could find this story about a couple dozen different ways.
The story is really funny, the world and power scale is very vast and has unlimited potential. This novel is very good 5/5 in my opinion.
You, yes you that person who are searching for a novel to read, thank god you met this comment. Now if youre asking to me if the story is good or not then welp, yes its good, really good actually first of all unlike most novel i read in this site this story is extremely original not just the concept but the place the main character is transported to, if you have read upto around 15-20 chapters you could probably feel how original the story is. you may think at the first few chapters that the writing style is preety boring and that the mc isnt as smart as someone with that "talent" would be but, dont give up[img=faceslap] because it will get better, funner, greater, smoother as the story progresses, throughout the whole story you would be able to see multiple characters that WILL leave an impression on you. the characters in this novel feels like human. main character is smart, realistic and talented its an amazing book. The thing i enjoy the most from this novel is 100% the main character, i love his character and his character development well i give this novel a 10/10 webnovel rating, 9/10 novel rating.
If you look at my profile you would see that I usually give novels a 5 star but its mostly because i dont want to give a novel a low rating and im going to tell you that this novel is worth the 5 star, though the writing style isnt as enjoyable as other novels the concept and story line carries it making it an amazing novel.
Wow
The Story and Character are good. I haven't read any Racist remarks. The only Thing that need fixing is the editing and a bit of the Translation
it was amazing at first but when the newer chapters starting from new its just gotten very confusing if you can can you please correct the chapters as I really enjoyed it at in point
The only pro is that the MC is OP and has a good base to start from.
As for the cons:
1> Author tried to put in mystery and failed miserably ( too much of anything just gets annoying and bad ).
2> The MC is a Naive snob who doesn't know the value of anything. He has been protected his whole life so doesn't even know slums exist and is waaay too idealistic.
3> The only ambition he has is to 'make his father proud' which is quite honestly just downright sad as it seems his entire character has been molded to present him as a good prince.
4> People don't want to start a war against his father and yet they discuss war to take control of Julius???????????