The plot would be somewhat interesting if not for the atrocious grammar, the rather apparent lack of editing, character decisions that make no sense, and how forced everything is.
The opening was just a banger and will hook you up into the story right from the start. The writings are super good and easy to follow. The pacing of the story is incredible and straightforward! Keep up the good work!All the best....
is the typical japanese novel harem isekai, with the beta mc included :/
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So I would like the readers to at least give my book a chance to take shape the same for thd characters , its real hard with you all only reading upto 50 and dropping and complaining , its over 1000 chapters the characters have lot of room to develop so calm down please
so far awesome , keep writing and it would be great if you could add more chapters and upload at least 2 chapters when you update ...........
where is new chapter? I with for 3 year?????
I love the story!! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!
Prepare yourselves for some seriously swoon-worthy moments. My heart did somersaults during those romantic scenes. ?❤️
I am not just giving 5 stars for the sake of it....This book has good grammar and we get 2 chapters daily, story is awesome and doesn’t have obvious plot holes.....author is doing a great job in character building and the MC’s character looks real......
Now, this novel is not the same as other cliche cultivation or game novels....
Many game novels are like-
1) I have to be the number one in the game and destroy the guild that destroyed me before...
2) WHAT I GOT A SUPER-HIDDEN,SUPER-POWERFUL,SUPER-adjective CLASS IN THE NEWBIE VILLAGE!!!!
3)Oh I got the all powerful,omega leveled, invincible tier item by killing slightly powerful monster
4)Now lets build a guild, let’s get a shop before anyone else, lets upgrade the guild before anyone else etc
5)Now lets annoy some other guild and make a enemy...
However this one is very different then others as MC interacts more with NPC’s than players. He gets a powerful item’jade’ but it can’t be used at all until higher stages...
He has powerful weapons but cannot use weapons higher grade than his cultivation and gets a weapon that grows with him....he doesn’t have the intention of becoming number one, build a guild to make money or other reasons....he doesn’t try to escalate small matters and is respectful to other people while standing his ground....this feels like he is transported to another world rather than playing a game.....
Many cultivation novels are like-
1)I need to destroy this clan in the town because they will surely try to destroy my clan....WHAT my clan is the attacker? no way, I always have higher moral ground....
2)Why is this little girl in front of the carriage? Let’s cripple the one inside the carriage instead of the horseman and do not scold the mother who somehow teleports after I crippled the young master for not looking after the kid.....
3)WHAT The young master’s father is clan leader and this clan has the backing of all powerful sect so I have to kill everyone....does anyone in the clan or sect have the intelligence to deal with this mess without making a bloodbath...
4)WHAT my lover has a fiance and is taken away by her clan..now I have to grow stronger to destroy the fiance’s clan but forgive the lover’s clan but I will not get the idea of peacefully breaking engagement .....
Here in this novel the guards of the young masters know who to offend and not ot offend...things don’t escalate to the point of clan annihilation .....MC doesn’t have very powerful enemies who force him to become the strongest....MC does other things than just fighting or cultivating which lets the author build a more realistic world wher ethere are not only muscle head but also intelligent people with common sense
You want nationalism, you got it.
You want fine translation quality to be the best part of a novel, you got it.
You want a decent premise to fall flat almost immediately, you got it.
This novel has everything!!
good novel
worth reading
has potential
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