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Fantasy stories like these always get me especially with the whole secret identity that really fills you with anticipation as you wait for him to reveal his real powers, keep it up author!
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currently in chap 18 so far the story is good. it has a lot of potential. I like like the fast pace and no drama so far. Pretty ?............
I think everything is a bit fast and I love grammar so you understand next problem.The character explanation was fine but I like a little more details.
The story concept is good. Some chapters switch to a completely different novel in the middle of a chapter. Most of the chapters writing are a little hard to read but not to bad some editing can fix; however one chapter at least was extremely hard to read I would say machine translation but I've read some machine translated novels that were easier to read then that one chapter (chapter 117), most chapters are not bad and the story is interesting so I have stuck with it for that long but not sure if I will any longer.
Hilarious, edgy and fun! At first I was slight amused and concerned by the very casual style of writing being used in a cultivation related novel, such as "bass boosted trap music
this is a spectacular book and it gave me a look into what my book was missing. i want to thank the author for giving me the inspiration to pick up my pen and write harder to improve and show that maybe make it to the top
YOW!!! It's been awhile since I've check my library ? then I noticed you've already passed 100 chapters bro. You have no idea how HAPPY I am for you bro ☺️ I need to step my game up lol ? what's your secret brother ?
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I will read more later - but I just have to say I appreciate that someone would also think of the "collateral damage" that comes along with great and heroic plots...it's not like you can make an omelette without breaking some eggs, but I laughed. Then I felt kinda guilty, since hey, anyone could end up as collateral damage in a novel. Then I laughed more, because the ideas and the sheer absurdity of these situations are legit hilarious.
Hello! I haven't finished reading this book yet so I can't really say anything about how good it is but as for now I'm really liking this idea hope you don't drop this
This is a good story but I must ask what happen to keido and big mom bc it seem they died and if they are who will be the empire in the new world?
