just disappointed, the novel has an unbelievable potential but the author does not manage to sublimate his work and tell a good story with these damages
A very well thought out and executed book. Nothing feels forced and it has a very natural flow to it. I hope you keep going with this.
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What the author said is no cheats i call BS since being the protagonist makes you the cheat
interesting world development .main character is not unsympathetic oneinteresting world development .main character is not unsympathetic one
I've just started reading this book and I can see so much determination.Good luck author,I love your style of narration,easy and understand. well detailed too.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?
Bro I like this..the fluff and purpose of the MC and the godlike MC are all dope...all I ask is that you build the romance...keep it happy and fluff no angsty tragic ****...no perverted issei type idiotic MC or wife stealing....its just sad..also the harem..dont make it stupid like 15 or 20//////....keep it small..also bash characters,....
anyway goodluck and goodshow
So, this one got selected... Certainly the quality and originality were not the deciding factors. A generic plot of the reincarnated urban cultivator genre, arrogant and self-centered MC, if you read Strongest Aband. Son, Rebirth of Urban Cultiv., Returning from Immortal World, it's more of the same but worse.
The novel is written very well, starting from the MC, the world around him, even to the love interest, the novel is also action packed, it definitely suits the "ruthless-mc" tag, as he's very interesting.
I can picture out scenes very well, the words just come together perfectly. Given it 5 for writing quality. for the stability updates, the author always has a note after his chapter, and I think hes updating frequently and on schedule so 5 for it, for story development, I would rate it 6/5 if there was a 6 here, because just from a few chapters its beggining to become very interesting already.
For character design, the MC is just my type, he reminds me of some manhwa MC that ruthlessly kills ant in some island, so im liking him vert much.
As for the world, its interesting so 5!
Keeping this to my library!
I like the new edge to the store. It’s a great start to a great story. I like the first half and am looking forward to seeing how this side of the store turns out.
I have really liked the way how author has taken time to slowly build relationship between characters ,cultivation background and give us a brief overview of the world. I see high potential just hope it follows something like espionage or military conquest and not just cultivation.
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3 chapters in and the smell of chinese nationalists flies. I didn't continue after that. I know what this novel will become. This novel is gonna be serve to an international audience. It is good to appreciate chinese culture and values but to demean others and probably put them in camps and exploit them for free labor is not. In conclusion, I don't recommend this novel. This is just culturally insensitive.