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TLWR(Too long won't read): Don't read it. It's purely wish fulfillment without any struggles. By reading it, you can easily get trapped. It's not worth getting trapped into. The first few chapters had promise of maybe some character relationships or development, but in the end he cut himself off from everyone he knew, spent the rest of his life as a billionaire and a God. On this website, there's nothing wrong with wish fulfillment because that's just the kind of stories that are highly rated here. But really, this story is just nonsensical. The author doesn't even bother to look up anything science related as a lot of the things here are pulled straight from his ass. He has a shallow perception of how the world works, and that is detrimental to writing a story ABOUT creating a FREAKING WORLD.
Translation quality: It's okay, no typos or anything. The translation and grammar itself is understandable
Stability of updates: It updates daily, so if you got sucked into this trap of a novel, you'll have a hard time getting out.
Story development: As of now, anything interesting has been thrown out of the window. I suspect that it might be a long time until the main character finds himself struggling with something again because he is literally a god at this point, both in terms of the world he's making, and the power he has in the real world. At the start, the author was doing something really interesting with the character. It showed that the main character was slowly becoming disconnected and less human as he became more and more powerful. The author could've delved deeper into the philosophy of being a human and becoming a God. On the values of life. But clearly, the author doesn't actually understand the value of being human as he just went ahead and made the main character cut off from the rest of the world so he could focus on being a god. I could even feel that this isn't what the character wanted. At the start, you can see his frustrations of not being able to get the girl even with mind reading. He's constantly haunted by his failed romantic relationship by the little sister of his ex. His two relationships after coming in touch with mind power had broken off of him because he didn't seem to love him. The author could've delved deep into the psychology of being all-powerful in exchange of your personal connections with other people. BUT, not all people on this website are looking for something great. Let's talk about in webnovel standards. First, a protaganist with a cheat, great! Second, beautiful love interests, great! Third, an external goal which drives the plot (curing himself of his cancer), great! What happens after he cured himself of cancer? Well, he just did his own thing and left everyone he knew. Now there was no direction besides building the world he created. What about the world he was creating? Maybe there are some fantastic struggles that could pull you in? Well, all of them are glossed over! Since it's a perspective of a god, everything happens in a blink of an eye. The most touching emotions I have felt so far is the one with the first human king and the first elf. I hope that the novel sprinkles more of these in the future, but I'm just really frustrated with the lack of struggle. Even mainstream novels at least pretend to have struggles for the mc before face slapping the villain with the main character's cheat!
Character design: For me, every character besides the MC is more loveable. I just can't stand the MC not because of himself, but because I can see how unnatural it is for the MC to do all of these things. As a writer and a reader, I feel that the MC has a lot that he wants to say, but is drowned by the voice of the author. The life of the MC, ironically even though he's becoming a god, he can only be controlled by the author without doing what he actually wants. He is simply the author's avatar, with no will of his own. AGHH
World background: A LOT of the logic doesn't make sense, BUT the system of getting mind power from the zero dimension is cool. If I could, I would write with this concept. It's cool because it explains why the beings in the world he created are able to get power from the source. But on a downside, the author clearly does not understand how 2D organisms work. You can't just lob an ant into a 2D space. Only a cross section would freaking fit because of the dimensions. It won't become a fucking drawing. Though it's understandable since the platform he was using was a scroll and kind of like a painting aesthetic? But it contradicts the actual laws of dimensions. Well, he was saying something like the 2d world in the scroll was slowly becoming 3d, but the author was pulling A LOT OF BULLSHIT LOGIC FROM HIS ASS. Just remembering how he turned the scroll world livable is just painful. My braincells are dying from trying to comprehend his flawed logic.
Final note: I wanted this to work. I, personally, want to feel what it's like to be God, but this novel oversimplifies it. I feel sorrow for the main character because he has such a terrible author. Who knows, maybe it'll get better in the future. But in the end, chapter 42 is a bad place to be. A reader should never go to a bad place just to read the good parts. I'll probably still follow this book because I am indeed in the trap of reading it, but I still have the hope that it becomes better.
If it becomes premium, I'll delete this book from my library. Peace.
simply i loved it and I'm expecting more from this author and keep up
i have peace in my heart even for simp MC, one day he will break free maybe but not killing enemy who try to kill u multiple time in face even buddha would have trouble
not to my tastes at all, pretty disappointed QI would add a novel like this. Sexual assault isn't something to joke and make light of like this novel does.
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liked the novel very much and just want to say that please do not bring in soldiers from a portal by using the system to make an army like some novels with systems do for the mc and update regularly
I like the story....................................................................................................................................
If you are looking for a good sports/football novel, this is the one. Currently the MC is transitioning from Belgium League 2 to Sheffield United in League One of the EFL.
A perfectly nice novel idea ruined, trash plots story not making sense most of the time chapters contradicting previous chapters. MC is really stupid and brain dead and other people have this system before him. They can walk around with guns in the city amd no one says anything no secrecy at all but no one talks about it the story is messed up cant stress the word enough literally a waste of time to read this couldn’t even go over 10chapters
Can someone tell me what is going on here. People keep rating this story down, yet it has more than 400 votes making it next up. Are some people hyping or faking the vote. I don't want to deliberately down vote the novel but there seem to be something going on
I read this cause of the first review and I am glad I did. its as the review states, the title is misleading but in a good way. this is not smut [atleast 20 chps in theres none ].
Though considering all thats here and the content in the bk, I am guessing , the author kinda meant it in a literal term, meaning man and female? like the actual relationship between a man and women and how their relationship is used in the cultivation, [ cause reading the chps, especially the one with the wings shit thats what I got.]
the 2 MC's seem to match each other and go stronger. the main MC is the male, and female is secondary. If you hate 2 MC's dont worry cause I too hate that shit but here, its actually done well. plus the male MC is the main main MC.
And whilst it might have the usual clichés [ nothing wrong ] of a cultivation novel, this is different from em all cause the MC and his lover dont separate, rather go on the journey together. And this is really a first, its fresh.
The MC is intelligent and yet also face smacking so thats good. And they are planners, that hide strength and wait for right moment, not some battle retards. Plus the relationship isnt rushed but build slowly. not some..' OH..so handsome , must be different from everyone '..or ' OH, you save me..have my children ' . none of that shit.
rather the characters knew each other and its build up as the story goes. Its build well and isnt cringe nor too exaggerated. Its sweet but not annoying and isnt rushed. if you like romance, this is way better than most cultivation novels. its properly focused and is more realistic. [ as opposed others in this genre ]
however, I was kinda confused by what happened in the starting, the research facility shit, I thought they transported from a modern cultivation world to a past cultivation world? or they were transported away from the facility? I am confused by that.
all in all I like it cause its way different from almost all cultivation stories out there [ as of C20 ]. its dope GL author