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That’s it? That’s the ending? Kinda just ended on a whimper. That was barely an ending. Guess the story really was rushed from the Return to Void realm after.
The Mc seems to be the narcissist type, am awaiting the next chapter release please
Update please!!
entertain me a bit , was this novel contains prejudice against mankind of anycolor " racist " do reply i was interested due to the number of chapters but if it contains racism then i rather bomb drop the novel because its an influencer and a pest of mankind
Overall it’s a pretty good novel, especially when you started writing 1 week ago.
Although it’ not the best, it good potential.
Wiritng mistakes is close to 0
Slow start but it starts picking up at chapter like 14 I think.
Personally I think if you develop a good cultivation system with names and allat later in the novels it would be pretty good.
Too many 1 star reviews, I' m here to balance it out. Tbh, it's enjoyable. And I read it until chapter 200/300. The MC and plots are quite irritating for me tho...
The best part about this is the translation, nothing else stands out. 500 chapters in and still not really a cultivation novel. The characters are all stupid to make the main appear smart. The author has definitely not captured what someone who as done “special ops” acts like. While there are a variety of personalities that get involved with that, in my experience there are traits all of them share. The author was unable to capture that mentality in his writing.
This a good example of what a translation should be with the quality work the translators do.
I don't know if its just me but I kinda skim through the chapters rather quickly? but everything else so far in the novel has been truly amazing and its like one of my most favourite novels so far as its everything I love turned into one thing (Apocalypse, FPS, Base Building,Zombies and Leveling/stats.) also the character has some good stuff and is about to get even better things, but it still doesn't feel like its an OP thing that makes him invincible, along with the fact he seems like an actual thinking person, not a whiney teenage otaku or nationalistic grandpa. Combined with what in the future is going to be guns plus martial arts is awesome and I cant wait for it to happen.
I've read wish fulfillment, but I've never seen it get this bad before.
All the cliches are there: arrogant CEO, beautiful sidekick, unreasonable policewoman. It goes on.
No thank you.
great story and worth reading. I am very happy to be able to read this story here. thank you [img=coins] [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
I love misunderstanding novels, so I love this one
Amazing story, nothing unusual for such an amazing author, highly recommend reading this book, reminds me of "psychic inventor in cultivation world".
