Essa novel é boa ?
That was one satisfying story. Especially the ending. It left me real satisfied ♡Usually, I read BL stories of dissimilar couples and ships but this one, LF and JH are so similar but at the same time not really. Hmm.. To me, this story feels like a paradox for some unknown reason haha. Nonethless, very satisfying, plus, the plot was very refreshing and the character settings and attitudes are so structured. ♡
The writer has great storytelling skills. Amazing work
Man, I've been giving all my power stones to this awesome novel and we are still not on the top ten.
C'mon everyone VOTE YE POWER STONES WE NEED THEM.
Is this just mercenary enrollment but with an American family lol
Nice story l must say.....
I also liked the author's writting skill more....
Its an interesting one and also a very good plot....
Keep going author...l am seeing a great future ahead of urs....
If an enemy has a name, then don't expect them to die anytime soon. The story has a few good elements of story telling within it, but due to the fact that the author tends to drag things out and repeat many plot points, it causes the story to feel like nothing is ever accomplished. Also this is the kind of story that uses random measurements to try to give things exaggeration, which is fine, but the numbers being thrown out one chapter, would be completely different in the next chapter.
The antagonist have more plot armor than the protagonist 98% of the time. After 150 chapters, I began to wonder if the author even hated the protagonist. Even if the protagonist gets a world defying power up, you can definitely expect the antagonist to get 5 random op skills that didn't exist before. The power correction is insane, as the protagonist gets more powerful, everyone else in the world seems to as well, but 3x as fast. As soon as the protagonist reaches a new realm of power, all of the sudden it seems like people at that high level are as common as stars in the sky.
The underlying story is there, but the execution is not done very well.
Fabulous. One of the best novels I've read, it's got details, a world, unique characters, and a good story, it's overall just a great and unique read.
The only "not great" parts are firstly the information bombs that were dropped in the first few chapters, explaining how everything in the game worked and so on, which at first seems annoying to read, but you don't have to get stuck on it, as it'll all make sense soon enough, don't drop the novel because of it(as some have).
The other "bad" thing about this novel, and the reason why it's score dropped a bit for me is it's inconsistent updates, and rather slow updates.. which is really understandable as he's writing the story, and not translating it I believe, and it's much more work than just reading something and writing it down in a different language.
Even so, the author's not to blame, it's just that this novel is so good that it leaves me wanting for more, checking daily until finally a new chapter is out, and so I'm trying to get some recognition for the novel by writing this review.
Try it out(you may skip the information bombs about the game workings, you'll not enjoy it any less if you find those troublesome, endure it)
Volume 1, Amazing. May you not stray off the path.
The characters seem real and relatable. I think this novel has the potential to get far, I'm looking forward to see where the author takes the story.
It is pretty good and fun to read. It's been a while since I found a novel where I don't mind unlocking the chapters to read. I hope it gets picked up soon. I'm curious about what will happen next.
Never pay to read..... HaHa eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee