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The writing is very painful to read
Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
the mc had the most infuriating personality. every 3 chapters is a repeat of 6 chapters before that just with different charecters. and at the rate the mc is going every person within a 100 miles of him will be a divine dragon. which just takes away from the story. he gives out divine dragon cultivation manuals like he is throwing bread to ducks. he gives his blood away to anyone that looks his direction. and he created another divine dragon which just shouldnt be, he is the biggest show boat nothing but the same old show boat personality, belittling people with skills given to him by the system acting like he worked hard for it. every third paragraph is a description of him having perverted thoughts. he seems obsessed with being above others at all times, and ruining people's lives just for disagreeing with him. the first 70 or so chapters were good and intertwining the rest is relative garbage with a douce and a tool of an mc
Everything was perfect i dont have nothing to say its the best novel i have ever read recommend you to read it
Hope everyone of you enjoy the story so far. I hope you can leave a review or message so I know how to improve the story and the writing. Have fun reading!
This is a good read for cultivation fans, but for those who hate wuxia it's not recommended to read it, because it's useless to change the protagonist but the mc's behavior is still like China
i think this book must be pickedwhy?? because world development and story background very interestingit' unique in it's on way. maybe in the first glance it's kinda cliche but with the stories goes it will became more interesting.please editor pick this book.
Why did I get divorced? Well, last week was my birthday. My wife didn't wish me a happy birthday. My parents forgot and so did my kids. I went to work and even my colleagues didn't wish me a happy birthday. As I entered my office, my secretary said, "Happy birthday, boss!" I felt so special. She asked me out for lunch. After lunch, she invited me to her apartment. We went there and she said, "Do you mind if I go into the bedroom for a minute?" "Okay," I said. She came out 5 minutes later with a birthday cake, my wife, my parents, my kids, my friends, & my colleagues all yelling, "SURPRISE!!!" while I was waiting on the sofa... naked.
Glad this one started out again, this time the Harem is progressing at a more natural speed. The Mother and Father are more interesting as well.Second time aroundThe story's so much betterIt's a lot of fun
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I have been reading this for a while now and I must say that the plot is interesting and it makes me curious ?️??. But, If there's something you need to improve, maybe you're expressing in words but overall, it's good!?