As I reader till chapter 81 I can assume some things about this novel and that is: it's dull, the characters have less personality than a door; the plot is very predictable and boring; the lemons are good but the relationship development doesn't exist, yuan call someone his wife as soon as he met them and already "love" them. This novel is good to pass time if you don't have anything else to do.
Hello, Secret_Ethereal here,A supportive readers and a fellow author. Please keep your hard work. I'm a good judge of book and I could see your book has a potential in the future. Cheer up and don't lose your interest in writing just because you still not find the right person to appreciate your masterpiece. I'm rooting for a new chapter.
Love this book baby Zhou Zhou is so funny!
So much anticipation when you were writing I finally read and I like it very real... More anticipation builds up in me waiting for this next chapter and for the book to be finished.
Interesting story, with a mysterious and exciting power system. I think it has a ton of potential and it growing like this proves it. I will add it to my collection and hope to see the author mature as a writer! Again, just the dialogue needs a touch-up, but it is suitable for now. Another updated review will come your way once I get deeper into the story!
Woah! That's a lot of chapters! What's your ave word count? I'm giving this a little boost because among the books that I've reviewed today, this one's really easy to the eyes, if you know what i mean?The story's really interesting though. And like i said earlier, the cover's cool!Can't believe i actually went over 140!!!yey!!!
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The first chapter had me hooked, I could not stop myself reading it. I'm not going to spoil anything for you it's up to you to read. Every word sent shiver down my spine. I kept reading just to see what happens next.
It was good until you started trying to make him a "good" person when I was looking for a mc the destroys everything and then I tried to push on but...it was to much when you dropped a baby on the 10 year old mc's lap forcing him to take care of it...which he does(because it looks like his sisters)...
This was a complete waste of time, and if I had to do it again I would gladly do it.We are in a phase of explosion with people translating/writing non stop with no regard to quality, however things were not this bad when this one came out and it was one of the really good ones.I would not recommend reading this normally on account of there not being an ending as author has passed away, but considering the level of work available today, fake reviews and manipulated ratings finding a good content to read is becoming harder and harder, so if you got the time do give this a try.