i read up to chapter 30... it good... better one out of all the rubbish,it have comedy, serious moment as well as a decent plot.one of a few i want to pass the selection!
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The best novel!! This story is funny as hell ? after reading all those other stories with super serious heavy story lines its a huge change of pace to read this. Hope new chapters come fast. I like!
This is great.The writing and plot development leaves much to be desired, having a open background lets you add characters and elements into the story anywhere you want to but it's a bad habit to make.You need to foreshadow and plan more how things can go, stacking events and descriptors one on top of the other does not a story make, that's just bad writing.Even as a comedy you tend to lean towards the more serious side whenever a harsh topic comes up. It's too careless to just change the tone, you have to break the tense atmosphere properly before running with a joke.At times, you corral your character's personality into single sentence or single word statements. If this was purely comedy it's fine but when you mix drama you need to avoid pigeon-holing your characters to stereotypes. This makes them less a person and more like a set piece used to work the scene.You rely too much on light novel tropes who also rely too much on anime tropes. If you're good it works, but like most light novel authors you don't quite realize certain gags work better visually than on text.You should read more wholesome literary comedies or watch more British humor to balance your slapstick with punny wit.
I too short can not read them why it is so short tho come on make the chapter longer okOr I might not read this but this is a music and I like music
continue this novel, it has a lot of potential, great character design and fast character development. I may get addicted to this ? please update .. i need more of this
It's really good. Although, I didn't read it here but this novel is great! ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
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honestly it's not a horrible read but would never spend money on it. the fights are bland as are the characters. they lack personality. there is no transition basically the character is in the dungeon then immediately is in the shop and it happens often
I love this journal so much
I love the book so much. God! the characters are beautiful, the dialogue goes smoothly and I didn't witness any error. Good book dear!
The story is intense. Wished the ending was different but the story kept my attention.