Writing quality is good, story development in this early stage is pretty good as well. Character design, updating stability and world background is satisfactory
Very good and descriptive! I love the way you started the novel with “A meaningless war” or smth like that. Also, your word-building is nice, I like it a lot! The plot already is intriguing and the book itself from the first phrase. Keep up the good work!
Really enjoy reading this book. Been reading awhile and voting stones. But realized I should probably leave a review.My only complaint is that there ain’t more to read. Characters are awesome, and the story gets freaking CRAZY. MC may start out weak, but that changes a lot.
thumbs up. good reading. will read again, need more edits story so good so far. good job author. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
False advertising! It's like a catfish but with a novel plot. I was finally hoping for a fully committed assassin MC in a novel but I got reader-blocked. The world background is interesting with a similar-ish power system to Insanity kinda. (Not really but closest description I could think of) however I dont care has this book has an in accurate synopsis.
Three phrases: I lost the sense of Time, my mind was fresh and relaxing when I read, The world is immersive and the system of cultivation is wonderful.
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I really like how to creat the character and the world in the book! WOrth the time to reading
So many 5 star reviews, but man this novel is completely makes the MC act more like a demon rather than angel. Not only is this story bland, but this is already on the road of trashy average cultivation novels. The MC is both a demon and Angel but all of his actions make him out as more of a demon and no angel. Rather the MC is a human with evil tendencies since apparently only his demon side speaks out to him while his angel side is no where but dead on the ground.
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Extraordinary good monster evolution story quickly becoming THE Best one of its genre I have ever read and I read a lot.Characters are best part of the novel. Worldbuilding is setup since beginning. Storyline offers many mysteries and connections even between old world and fantasy one.I don't want to write more. Just read it. It's my fav already.
just wanted to ask can he go back to real world at later age and flex ? I will change the rating