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Honestly I liked the first few chapters. After that its just keeps going down until chapter 18 when it became unreadable. After that I was just skipping You can see the author just wanted to get to thet point fast and he didn’t care about how it got there. The first two time skips were mean less and that’s 5 years. Even if he wanted to be low-key since the whole city know he could talk and walk and train when he was 1 year old it was useless. His father already know he was special since birth but didn’t do anything. And that’s just the tip of the iceberg. And that’s just the story development. Mind the shallow mc ,the useless guards and the sloppy power system in the world. Everything about it was just really sloppy and disappointing
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Possibly the best original books on this site in my opinion, it has a very interesting premise and good execution, however there are some parts that could be made better, for me the format of quotes are sometimes hard to read. The content is enjoyable but sometimes a bit weird, mc returns from fantasy world, sure. But how the hell did the original world gets copy of the fantasy world, while it may not be an exact copy it is on a thin line. I may have possibly read wrong on that tho. Also there seems to be a bit too many beauties already, I think it was 4 by now, to be honest it is a very common trope in novels and I thought this novel would go a bit differently but not so far so ~~ eh. That’s about all I could find wrong with it, wait I would think that this story requires some planing so it would take longer to write with it’s weird/different plot, it already shows. Yeah that’s about all, if your looking for a fresh breath into the vrmmorpg genre this is possibly the best choice in this platform.
uhh not really satisfied with last chap like wth why is there a another him and also its stupid well i know u can do etter next chap well no need to edit i am not well srry if i said somthing bad
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Just a Spade casually dropping by and leaving a review.This started out pretty average but gradually got better. I wouldn't mind if it continued♠️?
So far this is a great start! I feel like the story has a lot of potential especially since it has a game with cultivation mixed with leveling which isn't very common. I'm interested to see how the skills from the game will bleed into the real world and who's behind the game and why. I also like that the story doesn't focus a ton on her stats because I feel like a lot of stories with systems tend to take up like half the chapter with just showing stats. Another thing I like is how the mc doesn't seem really stupid. She hides her identity in the real world and doesn't flaunt her OPness (lol is that a word). Like some mcs in other novels make me want to strangle them and wonder how they're not dead yet (oh right plot armor), thank god this isn't one of them :) I hope we'll get to see more of the cultivation aspect and who her wifey is. Keep up the great work author!
I love this author, been reading his books for more than 2 years if I remember correctlyAll i can say he is my favourite of all. And this book has an interasting start and i can't wait to see where it goes
Website : qidian chinaViews : 5.27millionRating : 8.9(65)Chapters : 722Status : completed Word count : 2.21millionauthor level : lv3No of works : 9Disscussion : 103Year started : 2009 (pretty old imo) Chinese title : 游戏小工之元素操控师
Yo author, im gonna try this novel, i know you from the achievement junkie, it is one of the best novel in webnovel i guess, i believe this will have the same quality with your other novel as well. Nice grammar, interesting background, good story development.
Last review was at chapter 18. After reading so many chqpters I can’t help but me amazed by the wonders of this novel. It’s still at its peak 380 chqpters in. It’s got one of the biggest harems I’ve ever seen. Story is very interesting keeps you on your toes, mc is so strong and not dense, very calculative and has an amazing hero complex. Overall there’s nothing wrong with it. Can’t wait until he gets to higher stars