SinnersLaw
Hope there will be a good translator for this. its a mess the cultivation levels and names too. Hopefully webnovel could review the translation first and have a proper translator. i have to make out the names and adjust it in brains to read it nicely
I didn't even read this novel but I gave 5 star reviews because of my craze for Rise of Demon God. Please don't concentrate on other novels and give your 100% on writing the 1st novel. I am eagerly waiting for your chapters everyday so do try posting atleast 2 chapters a day for Rise of Demon God. Do not stop posting. All the best. Just post continuously we will make your novel best in the ranking with our power stones and best reviews.
It's decent, but honestly rather uninteresting. Also, I dislike the MC. He just follows the systems orders all the time, instead of doing things of his own initiative. Also, he's upset about being rich. Poor guy, I'm sure all the readers feel sympathetic.
This should be under the fanfic tab as this is clearly a Harry Potter fanfic. also what mc is dumb enough to go and get his cheat exposed in chapter one.
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Website : qidian chinaViews : 1.40 millionRating : 7.8(436)Chapters : 1666Status : completedWord count : 3.44 millionauthor rank : lv5This review is not copied from above review. In above review stats are wrong
its fine the story is average the background is fine but if you could explain a bit more about the place and background the writing is um lets just say the same as google translate it feels out of place instead of explaining i feel like the explaining give me more quistion because i feel there is something odd in the sentence because of the lack of explaining and english and if you could talk more about the character apperance thats all i have to say about it
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This story was great at the beginning but as the story goes on, you get angrier and angrier by the dumb antagonists in the story. Don't read this, really.
So did they use a condom? And what happened to VO? Is she Violet or not? I love Kat she's a perfect lead, Aiden has the right flex also for a lead. But Tar is a great side character love her enthusiasm, but let’s see how is Violet connected to that stranger in the Buick.
12 ch in. so far its really good. a bit of editing needed but better than most on these app. i love that the FMC is living their life.
