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It gives off a feeling of calmness and genuine peace but then there is a mystery aspect of the character and the tone shift was sudden but not bad. The plot moves well and smoothly and the pacing isn't bad. I enjoyed it.
Interesting start, of course we have an op protagonist but there are a lot of elements that make this a little bit more “real”. The protagonist is also quite smart (on,y read the 1st 20 chapters) and the pace of the story is quite good, not too slow that you feel there is so much filler chapters.So far an interesting read- looking forward to future chapters.SPOILER:MC transmigrated into a body of an 8 y.o. Whose parents have gone abroad to chase their drams and leave him to support his younger sister and pay off the mortgage the family took. (Worst parents ever but really, we do have parents that abandon their kids or treat their kids badly so not that far off reality).MC was originally a university student so he thought he’ be able to make fast cash but he’s now an 8 y.o. Not exactly an easy hire...Of course he gets his cheat and successfull starts his good business. His chest is recipes and a time dilation space where he can practice. But ingredients and everything else- he needs to buy on his own. :)
I like the story so far great plot and not too cliche of a horror story beginning but it really helps and develops as our MC continues on and his squad
pretty good novel so far. the overall idea of the story is executed nicely without being written like the typical cultivation novel. maybe the pace of a story is a tad bit slow, but if you could keep regular updates (maybe daily?) i can see this novel have great success, or maybe this last part of the pace and updates can just be my wishful thinking and overall preference. anyway keep up the good work and hope to see more
A decent novel, feels fresh, though a bit different tone than many others on this site. Like, imagine Plague Doctor, Thriller Paradise, Lord of Enigma or even Lord of the Mysteries (there was also another novel that didn't get out of trial, i can't recall the title that was going from parody to horror extremes and vice versa) - a dark world that is slowly pieced together for us readers, but it's.. not some calculative, confident MC, but two highschoolers that take the lead to unravel the picture, oh and they're so clueless about the dark side as well it seems like. The POVs are great, the background shown so far doesn't make the world any colorful, but.. at the same time, it's mixed with highschool reasoning and drama, haha. A really weird yet entertaining mix up. What's missing from this kind of setting so far in the 40 chapters is probably a sudden plot twist where sh...t goes down and the scene turns into bloodbath with these peaceful - at least on surface - people's heads rolling en masse. But honestly i like the current pace, so no need, no need. The things that bothered me though is the very concentrated exposure on the two guys, and the other thing is about the girl's mother - later MC realizes there's no such thing as mother and father because children are govt-raised. So.. how come the girl had an already dead dad, and lived with her mother for years when growing up? Did i miss something while reading at 3a.m.?
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No real complaints here. I enjoy the story, and characters so far. The only real consistent issues I've seen are the author's troubles with subject-verb agreement and that they don't refer to who's speaking often enough. Other than those two quirks though, solid novel. I'm a fan of vampires so I'm interested to see where this goes. Keep it up, author!
