Watch out popular manga creators are going to steal this peak because they could never make something as good in a million years............
AMAZING !! I just read two chapters and I was in !! The plot is very intriguing and engaging. Really loved the progression of the story !! Keep up the work !I am eagerly waiting for upcoming chapters !!
Five stars because I like my story.
Welcome to my second novel!
I already wrote and (nearly, depending on when you read this) finished my first novel Lightning Is the only Way at over 1300 chapters.
There have been some mistakes in my first novel since it was, well, my first novel. This one is my second novel, and I rectified those mistakes.
When I write, I mainly focus on emotions. It doesn't matter which one, power, loss, depression, happiness, whatever. I believe novels have to evoke emotions in the reader, and that's what I focus on.
You can give me whatever feedback you want, as long as it's actual feedback.
Have fun reading!
Main problem is a lot of characters are added in within a few chaps and it’s hard to keep track of them. . .
(as of 254)
Romance have degraded very badly, i mean xiufeng again goes and just start basically sexually assaulting another woman who is sexually depraved, xiufeng gives the excuse that he is doing this for his lovers, wow! then why don't his lovers have 'fun' with other men to 'help' him? I mean he already have 15+ lovers but he still goes and start having s*x with her, its not even at the development as of nuwa, I mean show your elemental bracelet rather sexually assaulting her, I am just waiting when he will start sending his women to other men for taking their 'help'.
The romance was well developed in spirit cultivation but in AHW, xiufeng just has become a s*x toy who only know to show his sexual prowess to women, same with katherine, liu xinyu, mermaid queen.
The harem has also become very big, no screentime for likes of lisa, yu, wuying, etc. He just come to new place, it has a sexually depraved queen, to which he takes advantage and start having sexual relationship with him, no time for other girls who were well developed personalities with their characters, but now there are only lustful women left-katherine, xinyu, mermaid queen, etc. Only 10 lines of lemon was shown with lisa, like seriously? and here its been 3 chapters, he is sexually assaulting another woman, no development, no personality, no fluff, no romance, just lusting.
Just the same thing with Nuwa, or rather it was 2-3 times more rushed, no badassness from xiufeng now, no training, all the things are done by ling and ming, he did not even cultivate properly, I have no qualms with dual cultivation but he do not do anything except that, everything from absorption to implementation are done by ling and ming, he just spout BS which he is very proud of and start showing his sexual prowess, basically he has become a s*x toy, he have 15+ women now but his little brother lose control in front of any beautiful woman, I really think that this guy now needs to be ntr'ed only then his eyes will open, the quality of harem, development and romance has degraded to sh*t from spirit cultivation.
DISAPPOINTING.
Spirit cultivation was one of the best novel i have ever read with great romance, the starting of AHW was also great but slowly slowly now it has very much degraded, basically the women are being forgotten now, they are not even mentioned 30-40 chapters, by which there had not been any interaction, *sigh* I hoped for much much better honestly.
Just wanna say THANK YOU for SPIRIT CULTIVATION.
Well the story just introduce a good quality on one country and make others stupid and slowpokes ahaha. It funny it almost a racial war which make many countries weak and one was strong. The character we can say he don't know about the competition but always overly lucky and always make his country win and get resources while others lesser luck ahaha.
Love the way this story starts off! I can tell it’s going to be super good. I love the action and the spy feel it has going on. And the characters seem to have a great connection so far.
Author my guy what a gem glad I found this loving it
overall standard everyone gets blan I'm a God honestly one of the better premises butt the author repeatedly brok his own logic for no reason and mc has no personality its difficult to understand why he does anything he does
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Excellent plot, the lead character aims to be powerful, smart, and calculated mind to get what he wanted or aspire. Worth reading. Guys, give it a try!