One of the most well written LITRPGs among original works! Characters are fleshed out, and world building is steady. The MC is not much of a talker and he has the tendency to act first, think later, causing lots of hilarious situations to happen. Definitely worth a read!
I disliked it initially because of the weird split personalities, but this novel is excellent and definitely worth a try.
Good stuff
I am at chp 9 and totally loved this chapter : Slow dance with me.
Waiting for the moment when Sarah shows them the recording. Hehehe.
I must say, wonderful story out line and i ship Keagen and Freddie.. Lol.. But this story is having nothing disturbing at all. Its going good in its own way. Good Effort dear author. :)
I don't think it is a copy of the old one. This reads like a reviewed and changed version. Like the next step in refining a book before release.
MC is just as stupid as before. If the system can plan elaborately and even plan years ahead to heal MCs finance, then the system can plan more than 24 hours ahead to ensure MC accomplishes his goals with as little obstruction as possible.
Trouble is MC just doesn't ask the right questions and every problem is solved deux ex machina by the system. This means that every problem and trouble the MC encounters is because he doesn't ask the right questions.
It is almost impossible to write a good story if at every turn the readers feal cheated because the only reason suspense happens in the book is the hand of the author.
Even the most stupid person would have asked "How can I live happily with my wife while ensuring everyone who wronged us gets what they deserve? " after a few years. And the MC had enough time to ask every question imaginable in prison.
Also, why didn't he just ask to be released earlier? Don't tell me the system can't get him a cellphone into prison. A single call was all he needed to get a pardon. This is how the American prison system works.
He could have build an empire from prison, with scores of researchers trying to find a cure for his fiance.
This story only works because the author keeps the MC stupid to the extreme.
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Simple story but what makes it a good read is the unveiling of the plot peel by peel. This is a old school format of novel writing in which you rarely find in this website like this.
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The setting is detailed and interesting and the story is also well written. The main issue I see is with paragraphing with some of the longer paragraphs just needing to be split up.
In my opinion, all the chapters have a unique and interesting idea. The story has creepy factors that make it more intriguing and exciting to read at the same time. The world itself felt quite alive and interesting to explore. The writing style in the story is some of the best writing styles in the book that I ever had and the flow of the story is pretty smooth and clear. The characters are also interesting to explore. Some of the chapters have a very good quality storyline and a unique plot twist.
However, some of the chapters in the story have a kind of alright execution and some of the chapter ideas feel kind of bland or the plot twist is pretty expected.
I think that's all I had to say about this story and Overall rating, in my opinion for this book is 8.7/10. Keep up a good work
I'm sure you won't be bored in reading this! this is a work of art! it has a lot of potentials! Both system and a goblin mc is fun to read. I want the author to update more!
I absolutely love this novel. I’m totally addicted to finding out what Yang Ling will do next. There is endless potential for sequels to the story and I hope more are provided soon. I will say I’m both disappointed and upset that the novel showed as completed when I started reading it but now that I’ve read all 750 chapters it’s clear that it is not finished and it’s been 2 months since a new chapter was posted making it look like Webnovel has dropped yet another novel. I would not have started if I’d known it was incomplete as they randomly drop way to many novels after suckering thousands of coins out of us.
Left me wanting more chapters, great stuff.