Novel was good until author made MC a r*pist and murderer. The one thing I can’t stand is MC r*ping women. Also when mc decides to go with his friends to massacre a city full of innocent people, (children included), because he’s bored? That’s all kinds of f*kd up.
I love this book, the writing is beautiful, the character discriptions are beautiful. The only complaint is about Mo Ran. He raped his shizun and mistreated him in every way in his past life. according to my morals, that is unacceptable. Other than that, beautiful work
I'll give the world background a perfect five. Overall I will say the story has a good plot. The writing style is ok but you have to work with some errors. I am not good with grammar so I cannot spot them. But I noticed some errors in capitalization. You willhave to work on that. That's all!
Uhh has the novel been canceled? because we'd very much like some more... the grammar quality doesn't matter as much anymore as i'm now a definite fan and i'm starting to miss reading this...
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It's a moving story from the start.It creates a unique adventure world which keeps you captivated.Despite the flaws of English, it's better than many novels on web novel.
A future masterpiece from a great Author Akkuzz ah......I don't have words to describe
That's a great way to start a book. Fill the first chapters with lots of intense scenes. I really got interested in this book. Definitely adding it to my collection. Good work Author.
It is dropped. There is no reason to translate dropped books. Just finish already started books first. Enough rant just writing for expexpexp
So far this novel is excellent. The action in it is heartfelt and tense, and the comedy is unique and refreshing. The only thing that's not top notch is the face slapping is a little forced, but other than that it is a truly refreshing and excellent novel.
Why the hell was this novel removed from the voting list, it has just been 20 days , and it had more supports than that piece of trash chinese racism filled i am gamer bullshit novel. While that book had been present there for far longer. And yet you remove this novel from the list, and choose that one. another example of how bullshit and discriminatory this app is. Fuck you webnovel, i am gonna pirate all novels from now on, screw you.
Idk, I thought that it would be funny them all giving him random things to try and hide that they themselves are weak af. Like in the description with the coin etc
However, what annoyed me greatly is how it went from funny to them using him for money.
Like it's fine if you want him to stay in your sect because even if it is a sht thing to do the mc is still benefiting from it so it can sort of be forgiven.
However, to me this is the limit. Not only using him by lying to him but then acc making him a fcking money printer... I can already see that when he masters alchemy, smithing etc they are gonna use him again and again.
Tbh this pisses me off because its gon from a light-hearted and funny vibe to instant scum.
I would rather it be like that story where he has a famous af master who only picked him because of his poor attribute only for him to have this talent. Making the master have him keep trying to random stuff to slow him down, read random things etc with the mc being like this and finding comprehension in everything and the master's reaction to it. Instead of this vibe of making the mc dumb af and constantly using him for there own gains....
SO yeah