Great build up of characters, strong writing, and loving the story line so far! Can’t wait to see where it goes!
All Hail Alpha Chaos and his upcoming 3rd great book.
I hope you don't abandon this halfway. I'm interested in the story. It looks pretty good. I'll be waiting to read more chapters. This has potential..
It is actually a great story easier to read and over great to read.
é meio difícil começar a ler algo de um autor que mal tem a capacidade de terminar uma novel antes de começar a escrever outras 10 sem motivo nenhum. então não sei...
Acceptable, but not more than average. I dislike the excessive interaction with the modern world, hell, I hate the fact that he's even able to travel back and forth, I am especially disgusted with the fact that he's even introducing stuff from the fantasy world to the modern world and not only the other way around. He's kind of living a double life, so this novel is half on earth half in a fantasy world.
The comedy is kinda subpar, it's really not that good. The mc himself is a somewhat worthless human being with no talents, no real courage and low intelligence, but he can succeed in life because he's capable of, that's right, pretending to be knowledgeable/amazing by using modern day information or magic world items, none of which has anything to do with him. He didn't even think twice before showing around some magic drugs in the modern world that can instantly(almost) heal injuries and trying to mass-produce and sell them, but of course there'll be no issues, since everyone is flowery retards in this world and nothing bad will likely ever happen. He can bring over everything he touches at the time of transfer which happens every three days on the dot, I guess he'll start bringing in guns, cars, modern farm equipment and even people later on, geez. The characters are quite flat, I don't feel as if they're living at all, they feel way too 2d. The world is similarly uninteresting.
Overall, this is a novel that isn't worth reading, at least not for me. It's not the worst I've seen, but it's really not a novel that I'd waste my time on and I freaking read 1600 chapters of MGA before I got so fed up with that garbage I quit, so that says something. This novel has similarly flat characters and a mc with sh*t for brains(no offense), but it also a chaotic setting where "everything goes and everything just falls in place without any issues", I can already predict how stupid this story will be later on when he starts bringing more stuff between worlds. Maybe he'll bring an airplane or missile to the fantasy world and qilin or dragon to the modern world. Would be kinda interesting if he managed to bring a bunch of hydrogen bombs to the fantasy world and a lot of top-level fantasy creatures to the modern world, that way both worlds can experience the apocalypse at the same time and maybe this story would take a turn for the better :D
Haven't read too far ahead but I only got one thing to say
First of all the picture is misleading...he is not an archer, he's a martial artist. The naming sense is terrible, and there are a lot of inconsistencies like one moment the enemy is a 2nd class martial master then at the next chapter he's become a 1st class. I mean come on. It's so confusing that I got tired oF it so I just skimmed thru a lot. Full of Chinese cliche. The mc is ruthless but he's always underestimated even if everybody knows that he's op just for the sake of bullshit. It's good if you're just starting to read novels. Whats with the Chinese always 'splitting',burning,defying heaven? If the heavens could just reply back it would say 'you Chinese fcks better get circumsised first before talking about splitting me.
great story that uses the vr game as a base isnt really a novel of the type it actually reads more as a syatem in a fanatys world novel which is great as it makes it more enjoable in my opinion theres a lot of forshadowing of great things to come as of chapter ~200. Overall a grear read can only recomend
Story's really good ,dropped it because of Ranzy character ...might pick up later
Thanks for the story. Don't drop.
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This story could have been little interesting if the character design , world background was better . There are many inconsistency in the plot one moment he is talking then suddenly next chapter he is doing something entirely different . story is not connected at all its like every chapter is not connected there are many time where chapter and plot is repeating . It is very tiring to read this . I sincerely hope that that the can be edited again and little changes are made so that it can become readable. I still have this in my library hope see the Improvement .