The story has great potential, and I feel the author's hard work in writing this novel, the writing is fine, sure there's space for improvement like certain repeated words, you may use synonyms for that so on and so forth, overall I enjoyed reading I recommended this mostly to those who enjoy creatures thriller type of novel.
I really enjoy this book. It is so well done that it wants me to come b ack for more and more. I just can't stop reading this that is how good this book is.
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Not a reading material.
"The Netherworld King's long grey hair fluttered despite the lack of wind"
I really don't understand why the author must write this line in prologue chapter. from my understanding, this netherworld king is a skeleton figure. so, where are those hairs attached in his head? did they grow in the bone skull? Did hair suppose to grow and attached in the scalp?
All you wet bananas prepare to get ***** slapped to f00k. A good storyline with a hint of mystery added. This mixed with rocky character relations and excellent humour creates a story not to be missed.
Great history just a bit to much into the *** part but still great its a must read one of my favorites right now keep up the good work im waiting alot from this
This book is amazing
The story pace a bit rushed
Feeling of satisfaction 100%
World building satisfactory without any confusions
OP MC with a bueutiful girl : check
Great overall story. But there hasn’t been a new chapter in months. I really hope the author didn’t drop it. Only thing I can think of that is a bit annoying is that each chapter doesn’t seem connected because of the skips in time between them. Other then that it is really good and I like the concept. By the way if it is a fallen archdemon does that mean it is good?
The plot is really good and loved the character personas XD. I WANT MORE! I have high expectations from this bookHope you publish the chapters on a basis.
This is the third book I'm reading that y'all wrote and liking it a lot can't wait to read more ????????????????????????