entah kenapa, setiap aku ketemu sama novel bagus tapi pake bahasa English, dan English itu kelemahan ku, tapi tenang. aku akan .membacanya DENGAN mengunakan translate.heheheh
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Hello! If you want to see what a novel that manages to perfectly fuse dungeons/systems/the apocolypse/ and zombies in a completely new and novel way looks like, you've come to the right place!Exaggerated praise aside, I think this is one of my best works yet. I've learned a lot over my years as a web novelist and I've poured everything I have into Dimension Descent. I hope you'll come out loving the characters, world and story as much as I did while writing it.
ok, it was easy enough to read all of what's been translated so far, but it was kind of boring tbhif any of the other trial reads are any good (haven't read them yet) you should maybe pass this one over
I am not too good at English as I am still learning, I would like to gain enlightenment through this story of mine. I want to fix my mistakes, so please don't hesitate on pointing out my wrong points. ?[Thank You]
Author-San here, shamelessly giving my review.
All I can say is that Truck-san took a holiday. And this time, im glad to announce that the Mc didn't die due to Truck-san.
The start was good until the part where he transported to the future. But things started to go downhill when he met this girl who is a CEO of his company... she was part of the one who humiliated him, throw him out of the company and did everything that could hurt his pride. It's really not something I could stand for.
its quite amusing to read this and can relieve stress.Okay Keep up the good Work and the please update.
It’ s incredible. keep gooningghhgg.
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After finishing the first volume of the story, I can finally give my work an honest rating.
1. As you can read from other reviews, the start of the novel is one of the best things I've ever written. But the pace afterwards is a bit sloppy.
2. I was too focused on developing the future plotlines of the story, I forgot to pace it properly, which I took care of immediately after realising my mistake.
3. I can say with surety that things improve later on (as you will see). I just request you to have patience while reading the first volume of the story.
4. the Second volume is where the story picks up and I promise to make it one of my best works ever.
Thanks for reading!
I read up to Chapter 7 which Evolution Online may be introduced in detail after (that’s my assumption). So far, the characters are written well. The set up and background is there for an all SYSTEMS GO! Keep up the good job!