Well done, I've read this twice now and enjoy it each time. I'm hoping that you were going to write more in the future. I'm waiting patiently!
It's really quite surprisingly good up until around C350 when the simulator gets an 'update' which is just a pure downgrade. From there on the only thing the story has to offer is 'Year 100, person 1 broke through to golden core' and so on, on and on. After that we get a simulation reward which is ludicrous and in a month or something they've all become top 10 strongest in the world. There was good plot before the simulator update but after that there's no plot at all. Characters are very 2d as well. Worth a read until the update.
Author here, first chapter is a bit short, but I plan on releasing longer chapters as I go along. First time writing a novel but hopefully it will contue to be interesting. Definitely not for those under 18 as the story progresses. The relationships are not going to just be bang and next so I'll try build them rather than protagonist banging like 1k people, but his harem will have interesting characters that are not often in others!
Enjoy
Probably one of the only sci-fi stories that are truly good in this site. I'm can wait to see how the sequel develops. I hope the author stays true to his words and delivers it to us.
This novel is amazing i read it before in arabic till ch150 and now I can't miss the chance to read it again .
The mc isn't OP ,the plot is unpredictable but make sense, the world building is 5 star and u will get shocked as every thing reveals itself as the story develop
You can't miss this great work , give it a chance
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The idea behind this story is good and I'm of the opinion that if the author keeps with the story to completion then they will have a fantastic first draft.That said the author tells the readers what's happening rather showing. This doesn't allow the reader to deeply immerse themselves in the story. I think this also contributes to the pacing problems of the story.Over all if you don't mind that this is a fledgling author then I believe this to be a promising story and hope the author will continue writing it.
Here's my promised review, it's good, it could use some work every now and then, and maybe a little longer chaps, but other than that, great job.
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Very good comic, God bless the author too, very much appreciated already, I love this novel a lot and wish you would still keep up that momentum, continue your good work
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